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some people believe that unemployment people should be made to work for their welfare/benefit payments. Others, however, see this as cheap labor

some people believe that unemployment people should be made to work for their welfare/benefit payments. Others, however, see this as cheap labor QMA29
The unemployment rate is increasing day by day. For this reason, Some people believe that they should do any work for financial benefits. Another group of people argue with that and say this is a cheap labour. Personally, I believe that unemployment people should work and in this essay I will discuss about the possible advantages and disadvantages with example. There are so many advantages to work. firstly, an unemployme people is a great liability for family as well as a country, When a people do any work, they can earn which can make them self-employment and financial relief. secondly, if every people do any job or work, they can contribute in country's economy wheres a country can produce a great youth power. Finally, working in the any ligel field can decreased pressure on government job. For instance, to find a Government job is a like a golden deer. It is very much tough to find a government job. So, if people are self employed they do not searching other optation like government job. However, there are many disadvantages too. Some times the a person is so needy for a job and man company or organization take this change and put then in a ver hard job. They also pay them very little ammount of money. Therefore, there are a high chance to use unemployed people as a cheap labour. Another disadvantage is it could be a waste of talent sometime. For example, a people may be did tremendous work or invent something which could be very benificial for the world but for the work pressure they are deprive from this. I firmly believe that employed people should do work as the unemployment rate is higher. If a person stay at home without any work it would be a great problem of the economy. moreover, this creats a serious problem on tax and tax payer aslo. Therefore, people should work outside and earn money. In conclusion, despite there are some disadvantages, I think is a good idea to work and earn some money for self-employment, contribution in country’s economy and support family
The unemployment rate is increasing day by day.
For this reason
,
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Some
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people
believe that they should do any
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work
for financial benefits. Another group of
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people
argue with that and say this is a
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cheap
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labour
.
Personally
, I believe that unemployment
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people
should
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work
and in this essay I will
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discuss about the
possible advantages and disadvantages with example.

There are
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so
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many
advantages to
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work
.
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firstly
, an
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unemployme
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people
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is
a great liability for family
as well
as a country, When a
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people
do any
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work
, they can earn which can
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make
them self-employment and financial relief.
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secondly
, if every
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people
do any
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job
or
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work
, they can contribute in country's economy
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wheres
a country can produce a great youth power.

Finally
, working in the any
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ligel
field can decreased pressure on
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government
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job
.
For instance
, to find a
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Government
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job
is a like a golden deer. It is
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very
much tough to find a
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government
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job
.
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So, if
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people
are
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self employed
they do not
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searching
other
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optation
like
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government
job.

However
, there are
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many
disadvantages too.
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Some
times
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the a
person is
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so
needy for a
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job
and
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man
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company
or organization take this
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change
and put then in a
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ver
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hard
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job
. They
also
pay them
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very
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little
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ammount
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, there are a high chance to
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use
unemployed
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people
as a
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cheap
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labour
.

Another
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disadvantage
is it could be a waste of talent sometime.
For example
, a
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people
may be
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did
tremendous
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work
or invent something which could be
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very
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benificial
for the world
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but
for the
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pressure they are
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deprive from
this.

I
firmly
believe that employed
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people
should do
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work
as the unemployment rate is higher.
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If
a person stay at home without any
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work
it would be a great problem of the economy.
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moreover
, this
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creats
a serious problem on tax and tax payer
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aslo
.
Therefore
,
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people
should
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work
outside and earn money.

In conclusion
, despite there are
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some
disadvantages, I
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think
is a
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good
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idea
to
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work
and earn
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some
money for self-employment, contribution in country’s economy and support family
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IELTS essay some people believe that unemployment people should be made to work for their welfare/benefit payments. Others, however, see this as cheap labor

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
351 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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