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some people believe that unemployed people should be made to work for their welfare benefit payment.others,however,see this as cheap labour.discuss the possible advantages and disadvantages of making unemployed people take any jo.

some people believe that unemployed people should be made to work for their welfare benefit payment. others, however, see this as cheap labour. discuss the possible advantages and disadvantages of making unemployed people take any jo. ekaV
in this concurrent world it is undoubtedly true that unemployed people should be made to work for their welfare or benefit payments. some people concur that these as cheap labor. However I quibble from them and profound that jobless people should be made to work for their welfare or benefit payments. Adequate evidence are obtainable to substantial the concept of jobless people have to work for their well-being or benefit payments the topnotch complete it jobless people get a chance to work then unemployment in the country will decrease. Another rational which houls me to reason is petron is if they work they can earn money and they can make a living. To uphold my notion I would quote an instance of if unemployed work the country will be able to improve in all respects. even they will not have to depend on anyone anymore for alive. they can earn their living cost from their job or work salary. what is half full for some, my appear half empty to others. so the public in general tend to distinguish that other people see this as a cheat lover which has multifarious reasons. who comments with some people deem that it is measurable exertion. actually they do not like this work respectively. withal they also uphold that some people want to do business or some people do not anything. to illustrate that they think that business is better than job, welfare or benefit related work or employment. ine recapitulation, I reiterate that they are innumerable strong factors supporting unemployed people have to work for their well being or benefits. however, it is contrary can be overlooked or controlled. consequently I firmly agree to the given statement.
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in
this concurrent world it is
undoubtedly
true that unemployed
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people
should
be made
to
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work
for their welfare or
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benefit
payments.
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some
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people
concur that these as
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cheap
labor.
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However
I quibble from them and profound that jobless
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people
should
be made
to
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work
for their welfare or
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benefit
payments. Adequate evidence are obtainable to substantial the concept of jobless
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people
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have to
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work
for their well-being or
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benefit
payments the topnotch complete it jobless
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people
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get
a chance to
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work
then unemployment in the country will decrease. Another rational which
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houls
me to reason is
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petron
is if they
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work
they can earn
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money and
they can
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make
a living. To uphold my notion I would quote an instance of if unemployed
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work
the country will be able to
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improve
in all respects.
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even
they will not
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have to
depend on anyone anymore for alive.
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they
can earn their living cost from their job or
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work
salary.
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what
is half full for
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some
, my appear half empty to others.
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so
the public
in general
tend to distinguish that other
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people
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see
this as a cheat lover which has multifarious reasons.
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who
comments with
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some
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people
deem that it is measurable exertion.
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actually
they do not like this
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work
respectively
.
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withal
they
also
uphold that
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some
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people
want to do business or
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some
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people
do not anything.
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to
illustrate that they
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think
that business is better than job, welfare or
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benefit
related
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work
or employment.
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ine
recapitulation, I reiterate that they are innumerable strong factors supporting unemployed
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people
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have to
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work
for their
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
well being
or
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benefits
.
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however
, it is contrary can
be overlooked
or controlled.
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consequently
I
firmly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
statement.
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IELTS essay some people believe that unemployed people should be made to work for their welfare benefit payment. others, however, see this as cheap labour. discuss the possible advantages and disadvantages of making unemployed people take any jo.

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