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Money is important for their workplace agre or disgeww

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There is no doubt that motivation reaches to people on high destination. The number of components encourage people for their jobs including money is the most important componet. I am agree with statement. I will discuss my point of views before reaching at any conclusion. To embark with, money is indispensable role in everyone s life. worker do more hardwork for promotion their jobs. They want to get high wages through making more efforts in jobs center. They pay more attention towards work and eventually don"t care about meal. In this way, they get success of good salary and live in luxurious life. In addition, worker makes effort due to fear of cut money in their wages. so they do work in better way. if employees success of giving best performance to company. so, employer can gives credit as a good work for example worker is 8, 000salary. when they gives best feedback toward work. so those time they receive gift money from manager. Moreover, superiors and inferiors becomes strong relationship which helps to create harmony relationship in workplace. so, they can better feel better to client and provides full satisfication with their work. Despite of this, employees feel bored and get stress in life which makes uncomfortable to them. To conclude, although money is best way to improve finacial problem of company but person should be focus towards health. To conclude, although money is best way to improve problem of company financial but employees must pay towards health
There is no doubt that motivation reaches to
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people
on high destination. The number of components
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encourage
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people
for their jobs including
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money
is the most
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important
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componet
. I am
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agree
with statement. I will discuss my point of views
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before
reaching at any conclusion.

To embark with,
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money
is indispensable role in everyone s life.
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worker
do more
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hardwork
for promotion their jobs. They want to
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get
high wages through making more efforts in jobs center. They pay more attention towards
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work
and
eventually
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don"t
care about meal. In this way, they
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get
success of
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good
salary and
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live
in luxurious life.
In addition
, worker
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makes
effort due to fear of
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cut
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money
in their wages.
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so
they do
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work
in better way.
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if
employees success of giving
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best
performance to
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company
.
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so
, employer can
The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "give"
gives
credit as a
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good
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work
for example
worker is 8, 000salary.
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when
they gives
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best
feedback toward
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work
.
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so
those time they receive gift
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money
from manager.

Moreover
, superiors and inferiors becomes strong relationship which
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helps
to create harmony relationship in workplace.
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so
, they can better feel better to client and provides full
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satisfication
with their
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work
.
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Despite of
this, employees feel bored and
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get
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stress
in life which
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makes
uncomfortable to them.

To conclude
, although
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money
is
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best
way to
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improve
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finacial
problem of
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company
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but
person should be focus towards health.

To conclude
, although
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money
is
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best
way to
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improve
problem of
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company
financial
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but
employees
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must
pay towards health
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IELTS essay Money is important for their workplace agre or disgeww

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
248 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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