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Intelligent machines such as robots are now being used. Is this a positive or negative trend?

Intelligent machines such as robots are now being used. Is this a positive or negative trend? 56aJn
Moore’s law dictates that the speed and capability of our computers would increase every couple of years and that they’ll be ever more cost-efficient in the future. Another tenet of this law is that this growth is exponential. The drastic improvement in computing power is what made advanced robotics possible. In the age of artificial intelligence, no one knows for sure just how far we can take it, and like opening a Pandora’s box, no one knows if the human race is headed towards its own ideals or its very own demise. Whether the emergence of AI is positive for us or not depends entirely on what happens after “singularity, ” a hypothetical future in which computer programs become sentient. Right now, the Hollywood depiction of the all-seeing, all-knowing, and omnipotent version of AI is a total misconception because as of now weak AIs are made base on our own thought processes and can only answer simple questions and give scripted response. Though weak AIs are not a threat to us, hyperintelligent, sentient AIs are. The worst-case scenario might akin to that in the movie “iRobot” starring Will Smith, where the centralized, hyperintelligent AI had come up with the undeniable logic of how the only way to preserve mankind is to forcibly control them so that they don’t end up destroying themselves; should clashes arise between the protein-based and silicon-based life forms, it’s obvious which side would win. The above is one scenario where the robots had an agenda in mind, but there is an alternate possibility where mankind is the one responsible for the retaliation of the intelligent machines. AI sentience implies that the AIs are capable of grasping abstract concepts such as good and evil, possess a range of emotions - elation, depression, aggression, and fear – just like we do, and make decisions based on how they feel; at this juncture, it would be wise for humans to consider viewing these sentient beings as equals and provide them the rights and entitlement they deserve, but knowing what men are, full of hubris and pride, we know full well that this is not going to happen. We may wind up beaten and defeated like ones in the “Animatrix” series where a full-on war broke out between the robot resistance and their fragile makers simply because the intelligent machines’ pacifist, diplomatic approach did not work well with the humans; difficult it seems for the humans to live and let live. Like most things, I suspect that the truth is somewhere in the middle. The AIs bring us convenience, and there is nothing to worry about now seeing as how they have yet to gain sentience; there’s not enough computing power for them to gain sentience anyway. However, we might have to worry about what comes next once we have hit that threshold.
Moore’s law dictates that the speed and capability of our computers would increase every couple of years and that they’ll be ever more cost-efficient in the future. Another tenet of this law is that this growth is exponential. The drastic improvement in computing power is what made advanced robotics possible. In the age of artificial intelligence, no one knows for sure
just
how far we can take it, and like opening a Pandora’s box, no one knows if the
human
race
is headed
towards its
own
ideals or its
very
own
demise.

Whether the emergence of AI is
positive
for us or not depends
entirely
on what happens after “singularity,
a hypothetical future in which computer programs become sentient. Right
now
, the Hollywood depiction of the all-seeing, all-knowing, and omnipotent version of AI is a total misconception
because
as of
now
weak
AIs
are made
base on our
own
thought
processes and can
only
answer simple questions and give scripted response. Though weak
AIs
are not a threat to us,
hyperintelligent
, sentient
AIs
are. The worst-case scenario might akin to that in the movie “iRobot” starring Will Smith, where the centralized,
hyperintelligent
AI had
come
up with the undeniable logic of how the
only
way to preserve mankind is to
forcibly
control them
so
that they don’t
end
up destroying themselves; should clashes arise between the protein-based and silicon-based life forms, it’s obvious which side would win.

The above is one scenario where the robots had an agenda in mind,
but
there is an alternate possibility where mankind is the one responsible for the retaliation of the intelligent machines. AI sentience implies that the
AIs
are capable of grasping abstract concepts such as
good
and evil, possess a range of emotions
-
elation, depression, aggression, and fear
just
like we do, and
make
decisions based on how they feel; at this juncture, it would be wise for
humans
to consider viewing these sentient beings as equals and provide them the rights and entitlement they deserve,
but
knowing what
men
are, full of hubris and pride, we know full well that this is not going to happen. We may wind up beaten and defeated like ones in the “
Animatrix
” series where a full-on war broke out between the robot resistance and their fragile makers
simply
because
the intelligent machines’ pacifist, diplomatic approach did not work well with the
humans
; difficult it seems for the
humans
to
live
and
let
live
.

Like most things, I suspect that the truth is somewhere in the middle. The
AIs
bring us convenience, and there is nothing to worry about
now
seeing as how they have
yet
to gain sentience; there’s not
enough
computing power for them to gain sentience anyway.
However
, we might
have to
worry about what
comes
next
once we have hit that threshold.
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IELTS essay Intelligent machines such as robots are now being used. Is this a positive or negative trend?

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