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Some people believe that there’s been a lot of noise pollution in city’s and in public areas. Discuss the possible causes and their problems for the same

Some people believe that there’s been a lot of noise pollution in city’s and in public areas. Discuss the possible causes and their problems for the same rb5Op
The importance of pollution especially sound pollution has always been the beatable over the years and there has been a lot of controversy around the same. It generally affects an overwhelming proportion of people and has many ramifications. This essay will discuss the possible cause of this problem and devise some rational solutions for the same. Firstly, the city‘s are the hubs for events and consequently contribute to a lot of noise, as people try to show off their happiness to others. Furthermore, it’s a trend for parties to play loud music as it is often seen as fun. To elucidate, in India marriages and other ceremonies cause a lot of noise pollution and so, now it’s not allowed to have them in public places. Booking banquets is a must. Therefore, many public places of an attribute to this pollution and so eradicating it from here is the need of the hour. Every problem comes with a solution to solve this, firstly appropriate timings can be restricted by the government for such Louth programmes, along with not allowing residential areas for this can be a positive move as it would not disrupt or disturb the lives of common people. Additionally, using sound absorbent can allow the people to regulate the noise which can be reduced conveniently after reasonable hours. To conclude, noise pollution disrupt the lives of animals and humans and so needs to be tackled by using sound absorbents limiting the hours and also restricting residential areas for such programmes.
The importance of
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pollution
especially
sound
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pollution
has always been the beatable over the years and there has been
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a lot of
controversy around the same. It
generally
affects an overwhelming proportion of
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people
and has
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many
ramifications. This essay will discuss the possible cause of this problem and devise
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some
rational solutions for the same.

Firstly
, the
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city‘s
are the hubs for
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events
and
consequently
contribute to
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a lot of
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noise
, as
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people
try to
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show
off their happiness to others.
Furthermore
, it’s a trend for parties to play loud music as it is
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often
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seen
as fun. To elucidate, in India marriages and other ceremonies cause
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a lot of
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noise
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pollution
and
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so
,
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now
it’s not
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allowed
to have them in public places. Booking banquets is a
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must
.
Therefore
,
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many
public places of an attribute to this
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pollution
and
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so
eradicating it from here is the need of the hour.

Every problem
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comes
with a solution to solve this,
firstly
appropriate timings can
be restricted
by the
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government
for such
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Louth
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programmes
, along with not allowing residential areas for this can be a
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positive
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move
as it would not disrupt or disturb the
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lives
of common
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people
.
Additionally
, using sound absorbent can
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allow
the
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people
to regulate the
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noise
which can be
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reduced
conveniently
after reasonable hours.

To conclude
,
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noise
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pollution
disrupt the
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lives
of animals and humans and
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so
needs to
be tackled
by using sound absorbents limiting the hours and
also
restricting residential areas for such
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programmes
.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that there’s been a lot of noise pollution in city’s and in public areas. Discuss the possible causes and their problems for the same

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
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