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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people believe that the only purpose of films is entertainment. Others say films have educational value. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiences. Write at least 250 words.

Films are made in different genres today. The genres could be comedy, sci-fi, romance, action, thriller, adventure and so on. They act as a major source of entertainment since it has a very large group of audience. However, it also has a certain amount of educational value depending upon the genre of the film. Firstly, films are made in different languages in different countries. The story line varies from one to another. Depending upon its content, people watch it for entertainment purpose. It keeps them engaged for 2 or 3 hours. There are a lot of things one could pickup by watching films. For example, foreign languages, music and dance. These also acts as values. In addition to it, films based on true incidents, documentaries, auto biography and science imbibes a lot of educational values to the viewers. There are education specific films that are made for different age groups to help in academics since concepts get clearer when seen visually. In my opinion, watching films are advantageous anyways. I agree upon both the views that it definitely is a good source of entertainment and also gives educational values. I recently watched a movie named "Interstellar". It was a fictional film where I could easily understand a lot of physics concepts such as gravity, space and binary which added to my educational values and the other parts of the film showed the relationship between a father and his children which added to my emotional values. All in all this film kept me entertained for 3 hours and i got to learn a lot of things. Hence both the views are acceptable and it depends on the audience how much pleased they feel with the film and give their opinion.
Films
are made
in
different
genres
today
. The genres could be comedy, sci-fi, romance, action, thriller, adventure and
so
on. They act as a major source of entertainment since it has a
very
large group of audience.
However
, it
also
has a certain amount of
educational
value
depending upon the genre of the film.

Firstly
, films
are made
in
different
languages in
different
countries. The story line varies from one to another. Depending upon its content,
people
watch
it for entertainment purpose. It
keeps
them engaged for 2 or 3 hours. There are a
lot
of things one could pickup by watching films.
For example
, foreign languages, music and dance. These
also
acts as values.

In addition
to it, films based on true incidents, documentaries, auto biography and science imbibes a
lot
of
educational
values to the viewers. There are education specific films that
are made
for
different
age groups to
help
in academics since concepts
get
clearer when
seen
visually
.

In my opinion, watching films are advantageous anyways. I
agree
upon both the views that it definitely is a
good
source of entertainment and
also
gives
educational
values. I recently
watched
a movie named
"
Interstellar
"
. It was a fictional film where I could
easily
understand a
lot
of physics concepts such as gravity, space and binary which
added
to my
educational
values and the other parts of the film
showed
the relationship between a father and his children which
added
to my emotional values.

All in all this film
kept
me entertained for 3 hours and
i
got
to learn a
lot
of things.

Hence
both the views are acceptable and it depends on the audience how much
pleased
they feel with the film and give their opinion.
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IELTS essay : Some people believe that the only purpose of films is entertainment. Others say films have educational value.

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289 words
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