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Some people believe that the best way of learning about life is by listening to the advice of family and friends. Other believe that the best way of learning about life is through personal experiences. Compare the advantages of these two different ways of learning about life. Which do you think is preferable? Use specific examples to support your preference.

Some people believe that the best way of learning about life is by listening to the advice of family and friends. Other believe that the best way of learning about life is through personal experiences. Compare the advantages of these two different ways of learning about life. Which do you think is preferable? Use specific examples to support your preference. 83oB
Learning takes place in both ways listening to other’s people advice and one’s own experience. Some people think that important life lessons can be best learn by listening to the advice of family and friends whereas, others believe that it can be best learnt through personal experiences. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages of the above mention two ways of learning about life. Firstly, learning from other’s life experience could be relatively easy way to avail oneself. Furthermore, it is very helpful for us to avoid mistakes because we already knew the consequences. Another thing is that getting guidelines from someone else can fulfill the need for psychological support and it is said that learning from someone else is nothing more but wisdom. Next to this, inspite of these advantages, relying on other people all the time simply shows the inability of a person to make his or her decisions. Sometimes trying to become someone else can lead to bad consequences. For instance, the greater significance is that when you make decisions by yourself according to the situation and even if something goes wrong we learn from our own mistakes. In my opinion, I prefer to learn about my life through my own personal experiences and mistakes as this will also help me to grow and become a better person. In conclusion, the learning process in life is multifaceted. Listening to the advice from friends and friends is unquestionable as we born out of their own experience. However, experiences makes a person better, and we never forgot what we learn from our own mistakes.
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me to grow and become a better person.

In conclusion
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process in
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is multifaceted
. Listening to the advice from friends and friends is unquestionable as
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we born
out of their
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However
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a person better, and we never forgot what we
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own
mistakes.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that the best way of learning about life is by listening to the advice of family and friends. Other believe that the best way of learning about life is through personal experiences. Compare the advantages of these two different ways of learning about life. Which do you think is preferable? Use specific examples to support your preference.

Essay
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5 paragraphs
266 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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