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Some people believe that the activities of large multinational corporations mostly benefit the economies of developing countries. Other people take the opposite view and feel that these multinationals are harmful. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that the activities of large multinational corporations mostly benefit the economies of developing countries. Other people take the opposite view and feel that these multinationals are harmful. lyrX
The commercial activities of multinational corporations are becoming increasingly debatable. A number of people think that the actions of huge global companies are beneficial to countries with growing economies while others maintain that these organizations have mainly adverse impacts. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why such companies are superior. There are a growing number of employees who believe that multinationals are effective patterns in terms of economic developments among developing nations. Put simply, their reasons are that the international investments provide local people with high paying jobs. In addition, a local company could be a branch of the larger businesses which can make huge profits. In Canada, for instance, statistical evidence suggests that the employees of internationals earn 32% more than staff of independent businesses. Overall, these people have good reason to believe that multinational corporations are highly profitable. In contrast to people who believe that vast global companies have great advantages are those who claim that these have opposite effects which must be considered. One of the major issues is that these companies can take customers from tiny firms. This means that the local businesses would be in economic recession and even they could go bankrupt. Restaurant chains of McDonald, for example, spend numerous money to advertise their products, causing local restaurants could not sell their own food products. In short, a number of people feel that these multinationals can threaten tiny business companies. In conclusion, although several people think that multinational enterprises benefit, other economists disagree and suggest that these companies are harmful. This essay discussed the various reasons why people hold these points of views and whether these would be a part of economic development. In my opinion, despite having some adverse influences, I believe multinational corporations are generally beneficial.
The commercial activities of
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multinational
corporations are becoming
increasingly
debatable. A number of
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people
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think
that the actions of huge global
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companies
are beneficial to countries with growing economies while others maintain that these organizations have
mainly
adverse impacts. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why such
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companies
are superior.

There are a growing number of employees who
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believe
that
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multinationals
are effective patterns in terms of economic developments among developing nations. Put
simply
, their reasons are that the international investments provide
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local
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people
with high paying jobs.
In addition
, a
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local
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company
could be a branch of the larger
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businesses
which can
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make
huge profits. In Canada,
for instance
, statistical evidence suggests that the employees of internationals earn 32% more than staff of independent
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businesses
.
Overall
, these
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people
have
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good
reason to
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believe
that
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multinational
corporations are
highly
profitable.

In contrast
to
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people
who
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believe
that vast global
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companies
have great advantages are those who claim that these have opposite effects which
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must
be considered
. One of the major issues is that these
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companies
can take customers from tiny firms. This means that the
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local
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businesses
would be in economic recession and even they could go bankrupt. Restaurant chains of McDonald,
for example
, spend numerous money to advertise their products, causing
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local
restaurants could not sell their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
food products. In short, a number of
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people
feel that these
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multinationals
can threaten tiny
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business
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
.

In conclusion
, although several
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people
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think
that
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multinational
enterprises benefit, other economists disagree and suggest that these
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companies
are harmful. This essay discussed the various reasons why
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people
hold these points of views and whether these would be a part of economic development. In my opinion, despite having
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some
adverse influences, I
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believe
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multinational
corporations are
generally
beneficial.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that the activities of large multinational corporations mostly benefit the economies of developing countries. Other people take the opposite view and feel that these multinationals are harmful.

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4 paragraphs
304 words
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