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five hundred year of joseon dynasty

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Joseon is the last area that was carried out in the Korean peninsula. founded by general lee Seong kye and the Confucian scholar jeon do jeon in 1392. and it's the longest Confucian dynasty. it was controlled by the lee royal clan for 518 years under the name of Joseon from its establishment till 1889 when the 28th refurbished it to the empire of Korea. there's a lot of interesting historical series that are about this period of history hereabouts we are maintaining to recognise some facts and how they were presented
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Joseon
is the last area that
was carried
out in the Korean peninsula.
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founded
by general lee
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Seong
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kye
and the Confucian scholar
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jeon
do
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jeon
in 1392.
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and
it's the longest Confucian dynasty.
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it
was controlled
by the lee royal clan for 518 years under the name of
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Joseon
from its establishment till 1889 when the 28th refurbished it to the empire of Korea.
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there
's
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a lot of
interesting historical series that are about
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period of history hereabouts we are maintaining to
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some
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IELTS essay five hundred year of joseon dynasty

Essay
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2 paragraphs
91 words
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