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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.

Child development is based on his / her capability to absorb, grab and interest of things known basis. If that is can be taught at the school or at home. Every individual comes with its own perspective of seeing the things, with this some people thinks that the a child development is best when he/she is at home and many other thinks other way round. Every aspects has its own advantages and disadvantages. To my context, people who thinks that the schools are the best place to develop the child are correct in the form, due to many reasons like, in school a child get to learn the diversity while meeting different children of age, gender, caste, race and color with this he/she able to learn the different cultures around the society and how to respect the differently. Ae being well versed with the subjects, achieving good score are not the only factor/s required to live and to stamp for the developed child. Whereas, these things cannot be taught at home, you can make the lessons learned, make him/her realize the emotions however the actual and the realistic world definitely be different from the well feed forum. My synthesis to this will be, if we are sending our children to school they will be a real person however if we are not in that case I must say we are producing more of human robots.
Child
development
is based
on his / her capability to absorb, grab and interest of things known basis. If
that is
can
be taught
at the
school
or at home. Every individual
comes
with its
own
perspective of seeing the things, with this
some
people
thinks
that
the a
child
development is best when he/she is at home and
many
other
thinks
other way round.
Every
aspects
has
its
own
advantages and disadvantages. To my context,
people
who
thinks
that the
schools
are the best place to develop the
child
are correct in the form, due to
many
reasons like, in
school
a
child
get
to learn the diversity while meeting
different
children of age, gender, caste, race and color with this he/
she
able to learn the
different
cultures around the society and how to respect the
differently
.
Ae
being well versed with the subjects, achieving
good
score are not the
only
factor/s required to
live
and to stamp for the developed
child
. Whereas, these things cannot
be taught
at home, you can
make
the lessons learned,
make
him/her realize the emotions
however
the actual and the realistic world definitely be
different
from the well feed forum. My synthesis to this will be, if we are sending our children to
school
they will be a real person
however
if we are not
in that case
I
must
say we are producing more of human robots.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.

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