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Some people believe that studying literature is important for individual character building while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both point of view and provide your opinion.

Nobody can deny that, books are helpful in every field such as preschool adult read the books without books life is not completed. some people believe that, studying literature is important for everyone because it helps to become good person but some say that, time is wasted by reading the book. I discuss my both views in the following paragraphs. To commence with, there are number of oblivious advantages to study the books. Firstly, literature books are divergent genera such as funny, stories books which are relieved to generalise the good personality and status. when we can study the books it is very beneficial to learn the moral values.
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life is not completed.
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. I discuss my both views in the following paragraphs. To commence with, there are
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oblivious advantages to study the
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are divergent genera such as
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funny
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which
are relieved
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personality and status.
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beneficial to learn the moral values.

IELTS essay Some people believe that studying literature is important for individual character building while others think it is a waste of time.

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  American English
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109 words
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