A number of people believe that an academic qualification enable juniors faster to get a well-paid job than being an inexperienced worker which others feel is the best way to get their satisfactions. In my view, an academic qualification is the key to success in life and it will be dissected in the futher essay.
On the one hand, there are plenty of benefits to beginning a career after leaving school. Firstly, teenagers can have a chance to be engaged in their dream job. They can make progress of their experience providing that young adults focus effort on working. Because they can have an opportunity working with expertises and they can be also be aware of the work environment. As a result, they get to the top. Secondly, this may be highly profitable for thier families for their families owing to the fact that there is not tuition fees. Thus, parents may be capable of doing a lot, including purchase anything and travel, although they do not work hard. Furthermore, this may lead to healthy lifestyle. The family of my best friend can be alternative example in this situation. My friend and her siblings worked after leaving school. That is why they travel around of the world every year and her parents have excellent health compared to that of my parents.
On the other hand, the most effective method is being a university or college graduate. If you graduate from a University or college, there will be clear guarantees in finding a high-powered job, as contrasted with workers who have not any qualifications. For instance, Islam Karimov was our first president. Despite his father was factory worker, he was able to help all his children getting a higher education. That is why Islam Karimov was promoted to the post of minister shortly after graduating from two Universities.
In conclusion, majorities believe that juniors have to study at University or college rather than working after leaving school which others think is best. In my opinion, provided that they want to have change in their lives, they need to get a higher education
A number of  
people
 believe that an academic qualification enable juniors faster to  
get
 a well-paid job than being an inexperienced worker which others feel is the best way to  
get
 their satisfactions. In my view, an academic qualification is the key to success in life and it will  
be dissected
 in the  
futher
 essay.
On the one hand, there are  
plenty
 of benefits to beginning a career after leaving school.  
Firstly
,  
teenagers
 can have a chance to  
be engaged
 in their dream job. They can  
make
 progress of their experience providing that young adults focus effort on working.  
Because
 they can have an opportunity working with  
expertises and
 they can be  
also
  be
 aware of the work environment.  
As a result
, they  
get
 to the top.  
Secondly
, this may be  
highly
 profitable for  
thier
 families for their families owing to the fact that there is not tuition fees.  
Thus
, parents may be capable of doing a lot, including  
purchase
 anything and travel, although they do not work  
hard
.  
Furthermore
, this may lead to healthy lifestyle. The family of my best friend can be alternative example in this situation. My friend and her siblings worked after leaving school.  
That is
 why they travel around of the world every year and her parents have excellent health compared to that of my parents. 
On the other hand
, the most effective method is being a university or college graduate. If you graduate from a University or college, there will be  
clear
 guarantees in finding a high-powered job, as contrasted with workers who have not any qualifications.  
For instance
, Islam  
Karimov
 was our  
first
 president. Despite his father was factory worker, he was able to  
help
 all his children getting a higher education.  
That is
 why Islam  
Karimov
  was promoted
 to the post of minister shortly after graduating from two Universities. 
In conclusion
, majorities believe that juniors  
have to
 study at University or college  
rather
 than working after leaving school which others  
think
 is best. In my opinion, provided that they want to have  
change
 in their  
lives
, they need to  
get
 a higher  
education