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Some people believe that students better perform in school when they are rewarded rather when they are punished To what extended do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that students better perform in school when they are rewarded rather when they are punished 3aQ9X

Some dualists argue that pupils who are encouraged to keep their performance by means of rewarding methods would be continuing this trend more accurately, while their opponents discount, albeit with lassitude, that despite of all regarding benefits this issue offers, there exists a plethora of statistics illustrating vice versa, and suggest methods of punishment. Ergo, they aim to persuade devotees who are concerned with this difficulty in a quite distinct way which my principles contain allusion to the first notion thoroughly.

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 argue that pupils who are encouraged
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 their performance by means of rewarding methods would be continuing this trend more accurately
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despite of
 all regarding benefits this issue offers, there exists a plethora of statistics illustrating vice versa, and suggest methods of punishment. Ergo, they aim to persuade devotees who are concerned
 with this difficulty in a quite distinct way which my principles contain allusion to the first
 notion thoroughly
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