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Some people believe that some internet websites should be restricted to prevent people from accessing sex or violent sites. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

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nowadays, the internet become more and more popular. Some people believed that restricting people to access some sites is beneficial. As far as I am concerned, I tend to agree with this idea. On the one hand, internet censorship has many drawbacks. First, it is not cheap to implement. It is beyond the reach of some countries where other needs should be put with priority. For example, when China placed restrictions on the internet in 2002 with 22 million users, their cost rose to 770 million, while With 770 million users now online, the final total could be in the eight-figure range. The second is that it stops the flow of information. Although internet censorship does cause the flow of false information, it can also control what individuals are allowed to post from their private accounts. Although you can stop disseminating the fake news but also stop the real news. It makes you lack new ideas and information. There are 23 other states in the U. S. where you can be arrested for a misdemeanor if your post is not true. According to the ACLU, Robert Frese was accused of violating the criminal defamation law in New Hampshire when he posted a comment online on a new website. On the one hand, internet censorship has many benefits. First, people can block access to pornography, violence if they feel harmful. For example, parents have full control over the online activities of theirschildren. They use it as a way to protect their children from online content which could be potentially dangerous through block access. Second, internet censorship ban people from seeking celebrity status through violence. There are enormous videos that are disturbing that users upload regularly that we can access through mass media. Although this content keeps us refreshed about the entire world, some people do not want to see beheading videos, violent deaths, or animal attacks appear on the regular feed. Finally, internet censorship limits access to illegal activities. Human trafficking, child pornography, murder for hiding are present if you're willing to go looking for them. When internet censorship is permitted, government agencies can block this content for public access. In short, people still have different opinions when it comes to limiting people's access to some sites. Therefore, I totally agree with the idea that internet censorship has many benefits.
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can block
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from seeking celebrity status through violence. There are enormous videos that are disturbing that users upload
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IELTS essay Some people believe that some internet websites should be restricted to prevent people from accessing sex or violent sites.

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