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some people believe that schools with same-sex are better, while others think that schools with girls and boys are more effective? which approach do you prefer? v.1

some people believe that schools with same-sex are better, while others think that schools with girls and boys are more effective? which approach do you prefer? v. 1
Learning by heart is the main key process of learning in order to success in education. This essay will totally disagree with the statement by showing that understanding and also practicing is more effective. One of the most effective methods of being successful in education is to understand the meaning. By understanding the meaning is easier for the brain to absorb information and to remember it for a longer time or forever. For example, according a recent survey from the Learning Institute of Albania which have been asking teachers about effective studying method of pupils, they admitted that students who learning by understanding firstly the meaning have higher grades in final exams rather than pupils who learnt by heart. Another important way which helps in the practice of learning is practiced over and over in the subject. This method is very effective because the more you repeat something, the stronger the connection between the neurons of the brain become to learn it. This technique is totally supported by the Psychology Department at Oxford University in their research project published last year. According to a study conducted by Oxford University, the majority of the excellent students have admitted that they learn by practicing every day for almost 3 hours. To conclude, the practice of learning is a very complicated and very personal where some people think that the best way is to memorize facts but understanding what you learn and practicing over the subject has resulted as more effective ways to succeed in education.
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Learning
by heart is the main key process of
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learning
in order to success in education. This essay will
totally
disagree with the statement by showing that
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understanding
and
also
practicing is more effective.

One of the most
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effective
methods of being successful in education is to understand the meaning. By
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understanding
the meaning is easier for the brain to absorb information and to remember it for a longer time or forever.
For example
, according a recent survey from the
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Learning
Institute of Albania which have been asking teachers about
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effective
studying method of pupils, they admitted that students who
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learning
by
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understanding
firstly
the meaning have higher grades in final exams
rather
than pupils who
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learnt
by heart.

Another
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important
way which
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helps
in the practice of
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learning
is practiced
over and over in the subject. This method is
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very
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effective
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because
the more you repeat something, the stronger the
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connection between
the neurons of the brain become to learn it. This technique is
totally
supported by the Psychology Department at Oxford University in their research project published last year. According to a study conducted by Oxford University, the majority of the excellent students have admitted that they learn by practicing every day for almost 3 hours.

To conclude
, the practice of
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learning
is a
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very
complicated and
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very
personal where
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some
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people
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think
that the best way is to memorize facts
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but
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understanding
what you learn and practicing over the subject has resulted as more
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effective
ways to succeed in education.
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IELTS essay some people believe that schools with same-sex are better, while others think that schools with girls and boys are more effective? which approach do you prefer? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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