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Some people believe that people have the right to university education, and government should make it free no matter what their financial background. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that people have the right to university education, and government should make it free no matter what their financial background. gJA7
It is true that some people argue for the universal right to free university education. While I accept that this may suit many people, I believe that it is impractical for governments to implement such a policy. On the one hand, it is not a practical dream to expect government authorities to fund higher education for those poorer sections of society, with low incomes and no savings. Without such funding, people from poor backgrounds would be unable to attend university. As a result, they would be excluded from many well-paid careers as engineers, doctors or lawyers. Social inequalities would be perpetuated and society as a whole would suffer, since those from low-income backgrounds would have no opportunity to develop their talents. The example of the US, during the struggle for civil rights for blacks and other minorities, shows the folly of denying equal educational opportunities for the poor. On the other hand, there would be an enormous strain on government budgets if free access to university were a right for everyone. At its simplest, people from rich families can afford to pay tuition fees and for their own maintenance during their studies. Attendance at university is a privilege, not a right, and if students can afford to pay for their studies, they should do so. In practical terms, governments cannot pay for the rich as well as the poor. Governments are faced with practical decisions on how to allocate their finite budgets, and funding free higher education for everyone would mean less money to spend on pressing issues such as health care or the environment. In conclusion, I disagree with the view that free higher education should be a right for everyone in society, and funding should be limited to those who otherwise could not afford to attend university. 297 words SAMPLE 3 Schools should not force children to learn a foreign language.
It is true that
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argue for the universal right to
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university

education. While I accept that this may suit
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many
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people
, I believe that it is

impractical for
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governments
to implement such a policy.

On the one hand, it is not a practical dream to
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expect
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government
authorities

to fund higher education for those poorer sections of society, with low

incomes and no savings. Without such funding,
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people
from poor

backgrounds would be unable to attend
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university
.
As a result
, they would
be excluded
from
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many
well-paid careers as engineers, doctors or lawyers.

Social inequalities would
be perpetuated
and society as a whole would suffer,

since those from low-income backgrounds would have no opportunity to

develop their talents. The example of the US, during the struggle for civil

rights for blacks and other minorities,
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shows
the folly of denying equal

educational opportunities for the poor.

On the other hand
, there would be an enormous strain on
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government
budgets

if
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free
access to
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university
were a right for everyone. At its simplest,
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people


from rich families can afford to pay tuition fees and for their
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own


maintenance during their studies. Attendance at
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university
is a privilege, not a

right, and if students can afford to pay for their studies, they should do
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so
. In

practical terms,
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governments
cannot pay for the rich
as well
as the poor.

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Governments
are faced
with practical decisions on how to allocate their finite

budgets, and funding
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free
higher education for everyone would mean less

money to spend on pressing issues such as health care or the environment.

In conclusion
, I disagree with the view that
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free
higher education should be a

right for everyone in society, and funding should
be limited
to those who

otherwise
could not afford to attend
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university. 297
words

SAMPLE 3

Schools should not force children to learn a foreign language.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that people have the right to university education, and government should make it free no matter what their financial background.

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313 words
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