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In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case. Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case. Do you think this is a positive or negative situation? eNAA
There is no doubt that home ownership is more vital than their rental. While some people have many reasons to support this point of view, I totally believe that this notion is totally advantageous. First, owing home is beneficial for privacy, this is because you can make any modification in the house’s design. for instance, home owners can combine two rooms in one big room or change the style of the kitchen or bathroom. In contrast, if you make any design modification in a rented house, the owner will then ask you to return every modification back to their original form. Second, I believe that people living in their owned home have a chance to save their money compared with those who live in rented houses, because when you buy a house you will not be asked to pay extra money. Nevertheless, rental costs increase gradually with time. for example, nowadays, the costs of renting houses are twice the rental costs 10 years ago while people bought their living place from the same period didn’t pay any extra money till now. the argument goes to if you chose to rent a house rather than owing one, you would lose more money that will affect your monthly budget negatively. This profoundly illustrates the positive impacts of owing a home rather than renting one. In conclusion, people believe that home ownership is more beneficial than rental with regard to privacy money saving. Moreover, and I totally believe that the merits of this side of argument far outweigh its demerits. عدد الكلمات 257 كلمة
There is no doubt that home ownership is more vital than their
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rental
. While
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some
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people
have
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many
reasons to support this point of view, I
totally
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believe
that this notion is
totally
advantageous.

First
, owing home is beneficial for privacy, this is
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because
you can
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make
any modification in the
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house’s
design.
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for
instance,
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home owners
can combine two rooms in one
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big
room or
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change
the style of the kitchen or bathroom.
In contrast
, if you
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make
any design modification in a rented
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house
, the owner will then ask you to return every modification back to their original form.

Second, I
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believe
that
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people
living in their
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owned
home have a chance to save their
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money
compared with those who
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live
in rented
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houses
,
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because
when you
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buy
a
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house
you will not
be asked
to pay extra
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money
.
Nevertheless
,
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rental
costs increase
gradually
with time.
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for
example, nowadays, the costs of renting
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houses
are twice the
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rental
costs 10 years ago while
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people
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bought
their living place from the same period didn’t pay any extra
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money
till
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now
.
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the
argument goes to if you chose to rent a
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house
rather
than owing one, you would lose more
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money
that will affect your monthly budget
negatively
. This
profoundly
illustrates the
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positive
impacts of owing a home
rather
than renting one.

In conclusion
,
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people
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believe
that home ownership is more beneficial than
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rental
with regard to privacy
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money
saving.
Moreover
, and I
totally
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believe
that the merits of this side of argument far outweigh its demerits.

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IELTS essay In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case. Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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260 words
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