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Some people believe that parents should supervise their children as close as they can. However, others believe that children should be free from control.

Some people believe that parents should supervise their children as close as they can. However, others believe that children should be free from control. OgnDG

According to some people parents should monitor their children regularly, others believe that children should be free from supervises. I believe that children should parents overlook and give freedom for all but both of this need in moderation. Parents today want supervise their children very seriously but results of this can be ugly for their children. For beneficial side in this idea if children will be in supervise with parents, children in young ages they do not enter in bad ways which have problems with health and family. Disadvantage side of this statement is children need more free time for your worldview because is parents overlooked children more and more they will be looks like in robot, which do all command's. This is can person very unusual habitat.

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 in young ages they do not enter in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
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