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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It has been obvious in recent years that diverse kind of choices is an issue that many people feel strongly about. For many people, this is considered to be a problem in many spheres. However, some argue that this is good conditions for many things. This essay will discuss the topic of having many choices in more detail. Let us start by looking at the advantages of having more choices. A growing number of people believe that if there are more choices, then everyone can get pleasure in choosing among them. There is also an argument that more options give more happiness. Take for example, in stores, people tend to choose those shops in which there are many goods. The reason is that more selections provide success by giving a different kind of variants of product in the purchase. Nevertheless, many people hold the view that more alternatives are not a good way to be pleasant at buy. This is because they say people may get stressed by looking at a lot of choices. To illustrate, let us consider the situation on the market. When a customer had many options for clothes in front of him in the shop, then he needs more time to choose one of the products and in the result, the probability to be amused in buy is only fifty percent. Moreover, many people hold the view that more choices are the indicator of successful marketing. There is also an argument that many selections provide the necessary size or form for the consumer. As an example, we can say that selecting a dress for women is not a simple thing. To choose concrete dress the people need to try on diverse kinds of dresses and take one of them. On the other hand, the scientist discovered that many options give more unhappiness after purchase. The reason is that women may regret the buy after one day. Having looked at both sides of the argument, the choices in modern life is the good condition at shopping. I believe everybody can enjoy choosing the goods if he learns the best approaches to choosing a product.
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, this
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spheres.
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argue that this is
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good
conditions for
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things. This essay will discuss the topic of having
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choices
in more detail.

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us
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start
by looking at the advantages of having more
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choices
. A growing number of
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people
believe that if there are more
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choices
, then everyone can
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get
pleasure in choosing among them. There is
also
an argument that more options give more happiness. Take
for example
, in stores,
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people
tend to choose those shops in which there are
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many
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goods
. The reason is that more selections provide success by giving a
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different
kind of variants of product in the
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purchase
.
Nevertheless
,
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many
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people
hold the view that more alternatives are not a
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good
way to be pleasant at
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buy
. This is
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they say
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may
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get
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by looking at
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a lot of
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choices
. To illustrate,
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let
us consider the situation on the market. When a customer had
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options for clothes in front of him in the shop, then he needs more time to choose one of the products and in the result, the probability to
be amused
in
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is
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fifty percent.

Moreover
,
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many
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people
hold the view that more
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choices
are the indicator of successful marketing. There is
also
an argument that
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many
selections provide the necessary size or form for the consumer. As an example, we can say that selecting a dress for women is not a simple thing. To choose concrete dress the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
need to try on diverse kinds of dresses and take one of them.
On the other hand
, the scientist discovered that
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many
options give more unhappiness after
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purchase
. The reason is that women may regret the
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buy
after one day.

Having looked at both sides of the argument, the
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choices
in modern life is the
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good
condition at shopping. I believe everybody can enjoy choosing the
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goods
if he learns the best approaches to choosing a product.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
357 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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