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SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT NOWADAYS WE HAVE TOO MANY CHOICES. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT

SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT NOWADAYS WE HAVE TOO MANY CHOICES. WITH THIS STATEMENT e8EGG
WITH INCREASE IN FOCUS ON RSEARCH AND DEVELOPMENT ALONG WITH EVOLUTION OF SCIENCE AND TECHNOLOGY IN LAST 3 TO 4 DECADE, WE ARE SURROUNDED WITH LOTS OF CHOICES. IN THIS ESSAY, I WILL DISCUSS TWO SPECIFIC AREA I. E EDUCATION ONLINE/OFFLINE AS WELL AS SOCIAL MEDIA MARKETING PLATFORM. FURTHER, I AM GOING TO EXTEND MY IDEAS BY EXPLAINING MY VIEWS WITH EXAMPLES. IN FIELD OF ONLINE EDUCATION, WE CAN ABLE TO STUDY BY SITTING IN ANY PART OF WORLD WITH A TABLET IN HAND. MOREOVER, THIS COVID 19 PANDEMIC LEADS TO COST EFFECTIVE PLATFORM WHICH PROVIDES LOTS OF CHOICES TO EVEN POOR STUDENTS. FOR INSTANT ONLINE PLATFORMS LIKES BYJUS AND UNACADEMY PROVIDE EVEN LOTS OF NO COST/SCOLARSHIPS MODULES FOR STUDENT. THESE VARIETY OF OPTIONS FURTHER RESULT INTO MORE EDU-TECH PLATFORM GIVING LOW COST MATERIAL TO STUDENT, WHICH CREATES MORE CHOICES
WITH INCREASE IN FOCUS ON
RSEARCH
AND DEVELOPMENT ALONG WITH EVOLUTION OF SCIENCE AND TECHNOLOGY IN LAST 3 TO 4 DECADE, WE
ARE SURROUNDED
WITH LOTS OF CHOICES. IN THIS ESSAY, I WILL DISCUSS TWO SPECIFIC AREA I. E EDUCATION ONLINE/OFFLINE
AS WELL
AS SOCIAL MEDIA MARKETING
PLATFORM
.
FURTHER
, I AM GOING TO EXTEND MY
IDEAS
BY EXPLAINING MY VIEWS WITH EXAMPLES.

IN FIELD OF ONLINE EDUCATION, WE
CAN ABLE TO
STUDY BY SITTING IN ANY PART OF WORLD WITH A TABLET IN HAND.
MOREOVER
, THIS
COVID 19
PANDEMIC LEADS TO COST EFFECTIVE
PLATFORM
WHICH PROVIDES LOTS OF CHOICES TO EVEN POOR STUDENTS. FOR INSTANT ONLINE
PLATFORMS
LIKES
BYJUS
AND
UNACADEMY
PROVIDE EVEN LOTS OF NO COST/
SCOLARSHIPS
MODULES FOR STUDENT. THESE VARIETY OF OPTIONS
FURTHER
RESULT INTO MORE
EDU-TECH
PLATFORM
GIVING LOW COST MATERIAL TO STUDENT, WHICH CREATES MORE
CHOICES
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IELTS essay SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT NOWADAYS WE HAVE TOO MANY CHOICES. WITH THIS STATEMENT

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