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some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. with this statement? 3aAWb
Many people opine, a modern life provide us an overwhelming number of options. I strongly believe with this statement because of advancement of technologies, internet and globalization has given as an incredible amount of alternatives and this both good and bad. Firstly, it has made a product rate available in cheap rates. Converserly, it leads to impulsive buying. It is true that, it is undeniable to internet as World Wide Web acquires us lots of services. Furthermore, it provide data to access diverse things. As in Roman era, before the internet information was a precious resource, people get a knowledge through books. Using of novels and books get shortened day by day because of many options giving by internet. Nowadays, education plays a vital role all because of technologies, schools and colleges teaches to student through online classes. Cosequently, youngers want to purchase attire they choose online rather go to shop to shop. They have too many choices through various applications to purchase attire or anything related to daily needs. Profession is also a option for help of career through internet. In earlier days, people migrated from rural areas to urban areas for job opportunities but now it is possible to find job in MNCs companies through web. For instance, in earlier days, people use television for entertaining with limited channels and shows, but now people want the channels or shows with their own choices and some are free of cost all due to advancement of technology. Conversely, the influence of internet, technical advancement of trades have eliminate barrier in international trade and trasportation. The foreign products with wide choice and goods had made people extremely consumerist and seeking the meaning of their life. Many people sale duplicate foreign products through fake applications and advertisements. However, some comes in the trap of that people and purchase a duplicate or broken products specially this work done by cosmetics companies. In the recent survey more than 80 percent companies sale duplicate product on the basis on the name of famous companies. Moreover, with the trend now comlanies take payment online and do fake work with the missuse of technology. In conclusion, nowadays if there is too many options then some take advantage and did wrong with other people. We are faced a huge amount of option in most areas in our life and they sometimes mislead and it become too difficult on that time to choose. In order to avoid these advantages we learn real things and make value for right choices for the diverse option in our life.
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Many
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people
opine, a modern
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life
provide us an overwhelming number of
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options
. I
strongly
believe with this statement
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because
of advancement of technologies, internet and globalization has
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given
as an incredible amount of alternatives and this both
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good
and
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bad
.
Firstly
, it has made a
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product
rate available in
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cheap
rates.
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Converserly
, it leads to impulsive buying.

It is true that, it is undeniable to internet as World Wide Web acquires us lots of services.
Furthermore
, it
Did you mean "provides"?
provide
data to access diverse things. As in Roman era,
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before
the internet information was a precious resource,
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people
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get
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "knowledge".
a knowledge
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through
books. Using of novels and books
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get
shortened day by day
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because
of
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many
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options
giving by internet. Nowadays, education plays a vital role all
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because
of technologies, schools and colleges teaches to student
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through
online classes.
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Cosequently
,
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youngers
want to
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purchase
attire they choose online
rather
go
This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only "to shop".
to shop to shop
. They have too
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many
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choices
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through
various applications to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
attire or anything related to daily needs. Profession is
also
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
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option
for
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help
of career
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through
internet. In earlier days,
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people
migrated from rural areas to urban areas for job opportunities
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but
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now
it is possible to find job in
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MNCs
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companies
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through
web.
For instance
, in earlier days,
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people
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use
television for entertaining with limited channels and
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shows
,
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but
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now
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people
want the channels or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
with their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
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choices
and
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some
are free of cost all due to advancement of technology.

Conversely
, the influence of internet, technical advancement of trades have
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eliminate
barrier in international trade and
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trasportation
. The foreign
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products
with wide
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choice
and
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goods
had made
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people
extremely
consumerist and seeking the meaning of their
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life
.
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Many
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people
sale duplicate foreign
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products
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through
fake applications and advertisements.
However
,
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some
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comes
in the trap of that
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people
and
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purchase
a duplicate or broken
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products
specially
this work done by cosmetics
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
companies
. In the recent survey more than 80 percent
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
companies
sale duplicate
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product
on the basis on the name of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
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companies
.
Moreover
, with the trend
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now
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comlanies
take payment online and do fake work with the
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missuse
of technology.

In conclusion
, nowadays if there is too
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
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options
then
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some
take advantage and did
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wrong
with other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
. We
are faced
a huge amount of
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option
in most areas in our
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
life and
they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
mislead and it
Did you mean "becomes"?
become
too difficult on that time to choose. In order to avoid these advantages we learn real things and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
value for right
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
choices
for the diverse
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option
in our
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life
.
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IELTS essay some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
427 words
5.5
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