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some people believe that nowadays we have too many choice. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

some people believe that nowadays we have too many choice. with this statement? 08G1
There are ample of person believe that recent days all types of facility available in this days. However, I agree to this idea to a large extent on the beside of a few strong arguments. The strongest arguments, I would suggest this arguments. A lots of same product also available in market and different brand and different types of material. For example, more clothes shop available in our country and different type of brand like puma, addidas etc. In this situation we are see the different price. when people are buying any product so they are cheacking a market price. Additionally, when people will be going to hotel that time we can many choice to eaten a food. This because verity of food available However, Gujrati foods, Panjabi foods etc. So at that time depands on the people who can eat the which type of foods. so nowadays, many people choice are different. However, I would not over look the other side too. To begin wit, whenever people are going to the market so at that time we can choose the many product but this product price are very high. this situation people are also confussion about it. Thus, to conclude the discussion it can be finally said that, I agree of this statement. I believe that choices are very important our life because whenever people going to any place so we can see the varity of shop and product are also available in market.
There are ample of person believe that recent days all
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types
of facility
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available
in
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this days
.
However
, I
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agree
to this
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idea
to a large extent on
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the beside of
a few strong arguments. The strongest arguments, I would suggest
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this
arguments.
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of same
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product
also
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available
in
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market
and
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different
brand and
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different
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types
of material.
For example
, more clothes shop
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available
in our country and
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different
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type
of brand like puma,
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addidas
etc. In this situation we are
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see
the
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different
price.
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when
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people
are buying any
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product
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so
they are
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cheacking
a
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market
price.
Additionally
, when
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people
will be going to hotel that time we can
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many
choice
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to eaten
a
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food
. This
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because
verity of
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food
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available
However
,
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Gujrati
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foods
,
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Panjabi
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foods
etc.
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So
at that time
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depands
on the
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people
who can eat the which
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type
of
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foods
.
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so
nowadays,
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many
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people
choice are
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different
.
However
, I would not over look the other side too. To
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begin
wit, whenever
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people
are going to the
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market
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so
at that time we can choose the
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many
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product
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but
this
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product
price are
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very
high.
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this
situation
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people
are
also
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confussion
about it.
Thus
,
to conclude
the discussion it can be
finally
said that, I
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agree
of this statement. I believe that choices are
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very
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important
our life
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because
whenever
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people
going to any place
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so
we can
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see
the
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varity
of shop and
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product
are
also
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available
in
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market
.

IELTS essay some people believe that nowadays we have too many choice. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
245 words
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