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Some people believe that nowadays many people believes many juices

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Nowadays be the advancement of machinery. it creates lots of opportunity to the people technology play and imperative role in the selection. I am totally agree with this statement. In this essay we discuss about how telecommunications provide myraid choices. To begin with technology individual can set up their own business mechanics help him to choose different types of business and they can learn from internet. for example in the past the people do not know about many profession because their thinking is in limited area as compared to now, with mechanization individual has main options for occupation. besides it, in this modernization people have choices to expand their work as well as earn money for instance there are many companies like Amazon, Flipkart they increased their own trading with the help of the technology. In addition to in modern era automation help human beings for selecting different items like grocery kitchen appliance is they have lot of option and varieties are available to illustrate by an example the people go online website and check quality of product and also varieties. In conclusion everyone has a lot of option in the modern era due to high tech set up their trading and expand it in world.
Nowadays
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the advancement of machinery.
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it
creates lots of opportunity to the
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people
technology play and imperative role in the selection. I am
totally
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agree
with this statement. In this essay we
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discuss about how
telecommunications provide
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myraid
choices. To
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begin
with technology individual can set up their
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own
business mechanics
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help
him to choose
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different
types of
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business and
they can learn from internet.
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for
example in the past the
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people
do not know about
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many profession
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because
their thinking is in limited area as compared to
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now
, with mechanization individual has main options for occupation.
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besides
it, in this modernization
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people
have choices to expand their work
as well
as earn money
for instance
there are
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many
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companies
like Amazon, Flipkart they increased their
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own
trading with the
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help
of the technology.
In addition
to in modern era automation
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help
human beings for selecting
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different
items like grocery kitchen appliance is they have
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lot of
option and varieties are available to illustrate by an example the
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people
go online website and
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check
quality of product and
also
varieties.
In conclusion
everyone has
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a lot of
option in the modern era due to high tech set up their trading and expand it in world.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that nowadays many people believes many juices

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
206 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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