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Describe a leader that I admire

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Today I’m going to talk ab a leader that I look up to, his name is Barack Obama. He is not only an American attorney and politician who served as the 44th president of the US but also the first African American to be elected to the presidency. I admire him for a variety of reasons. First of all, on the subject of his personality, I must confess that I was struck by his generosity and hard-working. He respects everyone, whether they are wealthy or impoverished. Moreover, he contributes to the overall development of the USA. He took different policies to enhance the country’s diplomatic influence over the states. In addition, he also served a great role to improve the economy of the country. Last but not least, he had run some campaigns for those persons who face racial discrimination in foreign countries.

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 campaigns for those persons who face racial discrimination in foreign countries. 