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Some people believe that it is valuable for society to experiment with bacteria and viruses while others feel this is dangerous and should not be don

Some people believe that it is valuable for society to experiment with bacteria and viruses while others feel this is dangerous and should not be don 06Dbn
In this contemporary world, it can be said that it is valuable for society to experiment with bacteria and viruses. As a result, there is a range of people who think this is dangerous and should not be done. The essay will examine both sides as well as indicate the author’s opinion. It is no doubt that EXPERIMENT WITH MICROORGANISMS IS ESSENTIAL FOR THE WORLD. THIS IS BECAUSE, THROUGH SUCH RESEARCH, SCIENTISTS GET TO UNDERSTAND THE PATHOGENESIS OF DISEASES CAUSED BY THESE PATHOGENS THEREBY PRODUCING DRUGS AND VACCINES AGAINST SUCH BIOLOGICAL AGENTS AS WELL AS RECOMMENDING SOME PRECAUTIONARY MEASURES AGAINST CONTRACTING THE DISEASES SHOULD THERE BE AN EPIDEMIC. Moreover researching microbes has many benefits to society. For example, the USA has found out covid 19 vaccines through experiments. Arguably, despite the undeniable benefits, it has some disadvantages. There are many reasons that experiments on bacteria and viruses should be banned. This evidence can be some types of bacteria and viruses can make you extremely ill and cause death. Moreover, bacteria and viruses spread more as the population is higher, also very difficult to manage to spread because people cannot see from their naked eyes. It can spread via air, human touch, breathing, water, food, and many more. For example, some researchers believe that the infamous coronavirus is man-made, this virus spreading across the globe rapidly, as death is rate 2% from this virus. in a nutshell, it is true to say that this work gives society both positive and negative effects. However, I believe that the overall result of such experiments is positive.
In this contemporary world, it can
be said
that it is valuable for society to
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experiment
with bacteria and
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viruses
.
As a result
, there is a range of
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people
who
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think
this is
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dangerous
and should not
be done
. The essay will examine both sides
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as well as
indicate the author’s opinion.

It is no doubt that
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EXPERIMENT
WITH MICROORGANISMS IS ESSENTIAL FOR THE WORLD. THIS IS
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BECAUSE
, THROUGH SUCH RESEARCH, SCIENTISTS
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GET
TO UNDERSTAND THE PATHOGENESIS OF DISEASES CAUSED BY THESE PATHOGENS THEREBY PRODUCING DRUGS AND VACCINES AGAINST SUCH BIOLOGICAL AGENTS
AS WELL
AS RECOMMENDING
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SOME
PRECAUTIONARY MEASURES AGAINST CONTRACTING THE DISEASES SHOULD THERE BE AN EPIDEMIC.
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Moreover
researching microbes has
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many
benefits to society.

For example
, the USA has found out
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covid 19
vaccines through experiments.

Arguably
, despite the undeniable benefits, it has
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some
disadvantages. There are
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many
reasons that
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experiments
on bacteria and
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viruses
should
be banned
. This evidence can be
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some
types of bacteria and
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viruses
can
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make
you
extremely
ill and cause death.
Moreover
, bacteria and
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viruses
spread more
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as
the population is higher,
also
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very
difficult to manage to spread
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because
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people
cannot
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see
from their naked eyes. It can spread via air, human touch, breathing, water, food, and
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many
more.
For example
,
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some
researchers believe that the infamous coronavirus is
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man
-made, this virus spreading across the globe
rapidly
, as death is rate 2% from this virus.

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in
a nutshell, it is true to say that this work gives society both
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positive
and
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negative
effects.
However
, I believe that the
overall
result of such
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experiments
is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
.

IELTS essay Some people believe that it is valuable for society to experiment with bacteria and viruses while others feel this is dangerous and should not be don

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
263 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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