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Some people believe that it is important to save all wild animals however others say that it is not important to save all but some of them.

Some people believe that it is important to save all wild animals however others say that it is not important to save all but some of them. VwLJ6
Animals have same important on earth as human. It is irrefutable that class of people think that its our responsibility to save all wildlife. However, few persons believe that yes its our duty to protect some wild animals not all. Apparently, there are pelthera of reasons why i am supported given notice firstly to begin with mostly people agree with we are care the all animals. Species even if due to this we can easily stop to extend the wildanimals. Apart from this with the help of this we can save the a lot of animals for our future generation. Undeniably, on the flip side of the given statement is more than persons are increasing pollution day by day by their car, bike, bus, etc. whereas on earth. In case some people hunting or doing deforestation. So due to this time to time mostly animals loss their shelter. To illustrate that the survey was conducted by British broad channel in london. Some countries around 90% people doing that king of activities or due to this same some species is totally vanished in this world. According to my point of view every coin have to side like the given statement while balance the earth both lifes have a some important also we do not have a right to disturbing wildlife.
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Animals
have same
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important
on earth as human. It is irrefutable that
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class
of
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people
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think
that
Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
its
our responsibility to save all wildlife.
However
, few persons believe that yes
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its
our duty to protect
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some
wild
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animals
not all.

Apparently
, there are
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pelthera
of reasons why
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am supported
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given
notice
firstly
to
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begin
with
mostly
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people
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agree
with we are care the all
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animals
. Species even if due to this we can
easily
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stop
to extend the
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wildanimals
. Apart from this with the
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help
of this we can save the
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a lot of
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animals
for our future generation.

Undeniably
, on the flip side of the
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given
statement is more than persons are increasing pollution
This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only "day by".
day by day by
their car, bike, bus, etc. whereas on earth. In case
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some
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people
hunting or doing deforestation.
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So
due to this time to time
mostly
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animals
loss their shelter. To illustrate that the survey
was conducted
by British broad channel in
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london
.
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Some
countries around 90%
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
doing that king of activities or due to this same
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
species is
totally
vanished in this world.

According to my point of view every coin
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have to
side like the
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given
statement while balance the earth both
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lifes have
a
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some
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important
also
we do not have a right to disturbing wildlife.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that it is important to save all wild animals however others say that it is not important to save all but some of them.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
219 words
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