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My full name is Tran Thi Phi Nhung

My full name is Tran Thi Phi Nhung LbX0n
My full name is Tran Thi Phi Nhung, I am 21 years mature this year, and currently, I am a final term student at the Industrial University of Ho Chi Minh City, my major is the English language, where I started to study from 2018 to 2022. Now, I'm doing an internship as a teaching assistant at EAP Education, and I'm writing an internship report. I hope that after I graduate, I want to be a secondary school English teacher at a school in Ho Chi Minh City or in my hometown, Khanh Hoa. However, I think I need to hone a good deal of knowledge, soft skills, as well as professional skills to become a good a teacher likes the instructors that I admire. In addition, perhaps I also need to work at a number of centers as a teaching assistant to gain numerous teaching experiences previously applying for a job as an English teacher at a secondary school.
My full name is Tran
Thi
Phi
Nhung
, I am 21 years mature this year, and
currently
, I am a final term student at the Industrial University of Ho Chi Minh City, my major is the English language, where I
started
to study from 2018 to 2022.
Now
, I'm doing an internship as a teaching assistant at EAP Education, and I'm writing an internship report. I hope that after I graduate, I want to be a secondary school English teacher at a school in Ho Chi Minh City or in my hometown,
Khanh
Hoa
.
However
, I
think
I need to hone a
good
deal of knowledge, soft
skills
,
as well
as professional
skills
to become a
good
a teacher likes the instructors that I admire.
In addition
, perhaps I
also
need to work at a number of centers as a teaching assistant to gain numerous teaching experiences previously applying for a job as an English teacher at a secondary school.
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IELTS essay My full name is Tran Thi Phi Nhung

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
160 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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