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My full name is Tran Thi Phi Nhung, I am 21 years old this year, and currently,

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My full name is Tran Thi Phi Nhung, I am 21 years old this year, and currently, I am a final year student at the Industrial University of Ho Chi Minh City, my major is English language, where I started to study in 2018 to 2022 school year. Now, I'm doing an internship as a teaching assistant at EAP Education, and I'm writing an internship report. I hope that after I graduate, I want to be a secondary school English teacher at a school in Ho Chi Minh City or in my hometown, Khanh Hoa. However, I think I need to hone a lot of knowledge, soft skills, as well as professional skills to become a good teacher like the instructors that I admire. In addition, perhaps I also need to work at some centers as a teaching assistant to gain a lot of teaching experience before applying for a job as an English teacher at a secondary school.
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IELTS essay My full name is Tran Thi Phi Nhung, I am 21 years old this year, and currently,

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