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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Author’s individual right should be concerned for not only culture and art products but also academic world. While I understand that some knowledge or information are too difficult to share freely because of its value, I prefer to approach this valuable documents more conveniently to help our work effectively. There are some reasons why people should express respect for researchers and scholars and their publications. Firstly, they have had difficult experiments with so much time, mind, money, even tears and blood, … to create a valuable products. Therefore, anyone should give a suitable fee to estimate properly for real value. Authors of these documents have more finance supports to continue expressing their abilities in future others. Besides, their right for intellectual properties make their role higher in specific subject. They will set their positions in academic world and be ready to do more delicates for science and society. In spite of the viewpoints mentioned above, I believe that reading this valuable and important information in business and academic would give more chances to improve for individual and many fields. For example, if students or beginers who do not have so much money read valuable researches in specialized subjects freely, they can shorten time of finding documents or study experiments to obtain data for their work. They can raise up the value of origin products to higher level, thereby, academic world have been more motivated and had more developments. On the other hand, when important information and reseaches are accessed by many professional people, they can be tried results to different fields in order to demonstrate theit realistic value. Therefore, these scientific researches become more effective and favorable for everyone. In conclusion, while there are many ideas that sharing too important and valuable information should not be free, I believe when these documents are reached more easily, there will be more motivations to improve our society.
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be concerned
for not
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only
culture and art products
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but
also
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academic
world. While I understand that
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some
knowledge or
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information
are too difficult to share
freely
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because
of its
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value
, I prefer to approach this
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valuable
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documents
more
conveniently
to
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help
our work
effectively
.

There are
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some
reasons why
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people
should express respect for researchers and scholars and their publications.
Firstly
, they have had difficult experiments with
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so
much time, mind, money, even tears and blood, … to create a
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valuable
products.
Therefore
, anyone should give a suitable fee to estimate
properly
for real
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value
. Authors of these
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documents
have more finance supports to continue expressing their abilities in future others.
Besides
, their right for intellectual properties
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make
their role higher in specific subject. They will set their positions in
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academic
world and be ready to do more
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delicates
for science and society.

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In spite of
the viewpoints mentioned above, I believe that reading this
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valuable
and
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important
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information
in business and
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academic
would give more chances to
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improve
for individual and
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many
fields.
For example
, if students or
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beginers
who do not have
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so
much money read
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valuable
researches in specialized subjects
freely
, they can shorten time of finding
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documents
or study experiments to obtain data for their work. They can raise up the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
value
of origin products to higher level, thereby,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
academic
world have been more motivated and had more developments.
On the other hand
, when
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important
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information
and
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reseaches
are accessed
by
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many
professional
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people
, they can
be tried
results to
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different
fields in order to demonstrate
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theit
realistic
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value
.
Therefore
, these scientific researches become more effective and favorable for everyone.

In conclusion
, while there are
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many
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ideas
that sharing too
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important
and
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valuable
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information
should not be free, I believe when these
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documents
are reached
more
easily
, there will be more motivations to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
our society.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
315 words
6.0
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