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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic: The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life. Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence. You should write at least 254 words.

As the technology grow, we capable to work on different things with multi-tasking. Multiple careers are common nowadays. However, is it really good for human being? There are some discussions. In the past, people mainly focus on single kind of job. If a person had been a worker, he would be a worker until he died. This kind of mind set still appear in some countries, like Japan. It seems difficult for people to exist from poverty. However, as he focused in single task from time to time, his experience on that specific task is adequate to solve any issues caused from it. It makes him unreplaceable. From the above, multiple careers sounds no really good, nevertheless, it helps people clear their pathways. It normally appears on young people. As young people do not have too much working experiences, they cannot totally define the benefits they can gain in specified items. Trial and error would be a good way to clear their mind. From my point of view, multiple careers and single carrer should work on different stage of life. When people are young, they should work on different things to investigate what they like. After having some experiences, choose the one they really like and establish this career path. In addition, learning should be one thing apply to elder or younger people. Accepting new skill and comparing to the current one would help to improve ourselves. There should always have no disadvantages. To conclude, having either single career or several career is not about the trend, it is about what you want to achieve. Clear your mind would be the most important idea to find your own working path. Furthermore, in circumstance, improving yourself by learning is always worthwhile.
As the technology grow,
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we capable
to work on
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different
things with
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multi-tasking
. Multiple
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careers
are common nowadays.
However
, is it
really
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good
for human being? There are
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some
discussions.

In the past,
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people
mainly
focus on
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single
kind of job. If a person had been a worker, he would be a worker until he
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died
. This kind of mind set
still
appear in
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some
countries, like Japan. It seems difficult for
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people
to exist from poverty.
However
, as he focused in
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single
task from time to time, his experience on that specific task is adequate to solve any issues caused from it. It
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makes
him unreplaceable.

From the above, multiple
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careers
sounds no
really
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good
,
nevertheless
, it
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helps
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people
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clear
their pathways. It
normally
appears on young
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people
. As young
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people
do not have too much working experiences, they cannot
totally
define the benefits they can gain in specified items. Trial and error would be a
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good
way to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
their mind.

From my point of view, multiple
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careers
and
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single
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carrer
should work on
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different
stage of life. When
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people
are young, they should work on
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different
things to investigate what they like. After having
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some
experiences, choose the one they
really
like and establish this
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career
path.

In addition
, learning should be one thing apply to elder or younger
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people
. Accepting new
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skill
and comparing to the
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current
one would
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help
to
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improve
ourselves. There should always have no disadvantages.

To conclude
, having either
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single
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career
or several
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career
is not about the trend, it is about what you want to achieve.
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Clear
your mind would be the most
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important
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idea
to find your
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own
working path.
Furthermore
, in circumstance, improving yourself by learning is always worthwhile.
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IELTS essay Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic: The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life. Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
290 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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