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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfatory job or shortage of money . others aruge that it is better to try and improve such situations.

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfatory job or shortage of money. others aruge that it is better to try and improve such situations. yp7D
Lets embark on the important aspect of a working person's life. We all face both type situations while we are at work. Typically the bad situations of accepting or overcome the situation. I would like to put my opinion as being more favor to the overcoming such situations. While we see that, people do accept the unsatisfactory job or shortage of the pay scale what they get for their work under some personal and professional circumstances
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of accepting or overcome the
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. I would like to put my opinion as being more favor to the overcoming such
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. While we
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do accept the unsatisfactory job or shortage of the pay scale what they
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IELTS essay Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfatory job or shortage of money. others aruge that it is better to try and improve such situations.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
75 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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