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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfatory job or shortage of money . others aruge that it is better to try and improve such situations.

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfatory job or shortage of money. others aruge that it is better to try and improve such situations. yp7D

Lets embark on the important aspect of a working person's life. We all face both type situations while we are at work. Typically the bad situations of accepting or overcome the situation. I would like to put my opinion as being more favor to the overcoming such situations. While we see that, people do accept the unsatisfactory job or shortage of the pay scale what they get for their work under some personal and professional circumstances

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