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Using public transportation

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Nowadays, most of the world uses the concept of “Public Transports”. Some find it useful  and quicker than walking by feet while others say it causes obesity. Let’s start off with the benefits. Firstly, public transport takes up less time and is saves a ton of money. It is less dangerous because it’s less likely that someone will crash into a huge and long train(example). It helps the environment by causing fewer greenhouse gases to be emitted. There are different people in the world and unfortunately some cannot afford a car, public transport is the only solution and saves them money. Government makes profit from transport and this money can go into the country’s charity or developing a city for the comfort of people. However, every idea has its own disadvantages. Public transport is often crowded which is unhealthy because nowadays it will help the spread of COVID-19. It is also unreliable and may cause delays. Some regions have an unsafe transport area. Some people are also quite used to their cars and simply do not want to switch to public transport at all. Some can afford cars, some can't and a group who doesn't want to own a car because of their expenses. I just think it’s their choice to use public transport or not.
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Transports”
.
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find it useful
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and quicker than walking by feet while others say it causes obesity.

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’s
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start
off with the benefits.
Firstly
,
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public
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transport
takes up less time and is saves a ton of money. It is less
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dangerous
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because
it’s less likely that someone will crash into a huge and long train(example). It
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helps
the environment by causing fewer greenhouse gases to
be emitted
. There are
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different
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people
in the world and unfortunately
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some
cannot afford a
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car
,
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public
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transport
is the
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only
solution and saves them money.
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Government
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makes
profit from
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transport
and this money can go into the country’s charity or developing a city for the comfort of
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people
.

However
, every
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has its
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disadvantages.
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crowded which is unhealthy
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nowadays it will
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help
the spread of COVID-19. It is
also
unreliable and may cause delays.
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regions have an unsafe
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transport
area.

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are
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to their
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cars
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do not want to switch to
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public
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transport
at all.
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can afford
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cars
,
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own
a
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because
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just
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think
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transport
or not.
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IELTS essay Using public transportation

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
216 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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