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some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. mg2A

It is argued that receiving the bad condition such an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money is the best way, while others believe that trying and improving such situations. Despite it can go happiness, this essay agree that hard work can tackle these. Increasing the happiness is one of contribution of workers if they receive all bad situations such an unsatisfactory and money shortage. This is because they have awareness to do not demand on the boss. For instance, in Indonesia, most of people work in the local office which being given by president. Although they are received with small salary around 2 millions rupiah, they can make life with their family such as giving food, school, and pocket money. As a result, some Indonesian can life with happiness. Nonetheless, others believe that they can try and improve these problem with hardwork, leading to have money and become rich. They have spirit in their mind, and doing not to have hard life. According to Brawijaya University, 60% of Indonesian are retiring from their work in the local office because they want to be entrepreneur. To began this job need the bussiness much more, but if this run well, it can make amazing salary. In addition, they can go out from poverty, and spirit to give job for others. To sum up, the argument of receiving these problems can bring some happiness are believed by some people, while the way of I believe that it must try and improve with hardwork.

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 that receiving the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
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money
 is the best way, while others believe that trying and improving such situations. Despite it can go happiness, this essay This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 work can tackle these.

Increasing the happiness is one of contribution of workers if they receive all This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 situations such an unsatisfactory and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 shortage. This is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they have awareness to do not demand on the boss. For instance
, in Indonesia, most of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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given
 by president. Although they are received
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small
 salary around 2 millions rupiah, they can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
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. As a result
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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Nonetheless, others believe that they can "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "try to" is recommended for writing.try to
try and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
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these problem
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hardwork
, leading to have You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 and become rich. They have spirit in their mind, and doing not to have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 life. According to Possible spelling mistake found.Srivijaya
Brawijaya
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because
 they want to be entrepreneur. Did you mean "To begin"?To begin
To began
 this job need the Possible spelling mistake found.businessbossinessfussinessbushiness
bussiness
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but
 if this run well, it can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 amazing salary. In addition
, they can go out from poverty, and spirit to give job for others.

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some
 happiness are believed
 by This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
, while the way of I believe that it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
"Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "try to" is recommended for writing.try to
try and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 with Possible spelling mistake found.handworkhard work
hardwork
. 