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some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is a better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is a better to try and improve such situations. BN1p
Bad situations is accepted by some people such as unsatisfactory job or lack of money but some individuals doesn't lose hope and always try to find the ways for improvement and try to find the alternative way to make their lives easy. In my opinion, these actions are some how depend on what situation the person is in but trying hard to improve your bad situation is always better than loosing hopes. This essay will discuss both the points. Firstly, in this modern-era many individuals are struggling with their job, moreover, In a recent survey, 60% of new generation is still not happy with their job as they are not satisfied with what they are getting in return of their hard work, however, they have accepted their fate and don't show courage to change their company. The main reason behind this situation is they doesn't have faith in themselves, for instance, an individual thinks that he can't do better than this, in addition, he thinks that their is no more talent in him that makes him do better than this. In this way, This thinking makes him belive to accept bad situations. On the other hand, their are some people who doen't belive in fate. If they are not happy with what they have then they motivate themselves without thinking their future and try again and again until and unless they achieve thier goal. For instance, a person who always fails to achieve upper post in his company but he never loose hope thinking that may be next time he will get better chance of success and next time, after so much hard work he gets what he want. In addition, he achieves his goals and get good amount of money from which he could live his live better than before. In Conclusion, we discuss both the points and I think, trying hard to improve your skills and not loosing hope is always benificial for a person who wants to be successfull in life.
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individuals doesn't lose
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and always try to find the ways for improvement and try

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easy. In my opinion, these actions are
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depend on what situation the person is in
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trying
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to
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is always
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better
than loosing
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. This essay will discuss both the points.

Firstly
, in this modern-era
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individuals are struggling with their job,
moreover
, In a recent survey, 60% of new generation is
still
not happy with their job as they are not

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satisfied
with what they are getting in return of their
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hard
work,
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, they have
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accepted
their fate and don't
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change
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. The main reason behind
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situation
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doesn't
have faith in themselves,
for instance
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that he can't do
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better
than this,
in addition
, he
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that
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is no more talent in him that
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him do
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to accept
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who
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belive
in fate. If they are not happy with what they have then they motivate themselves without thinking their future
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and


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try
again and again until and unless they achieve
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thier
goal.
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, a person who always fails to achieve upper post in his
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he never loose
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thinking that may be
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time he will
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work he
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amount of money from which
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he


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his
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In Conclusion
, we discuss both the points and I
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to
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your
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skills
and not loosing
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benificial
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successfull
in life.
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IELTS essay some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is a better to try and improve such situations.

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  American English
9 paragraphs
334 words
5.5
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