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It is more important to have a good family than to have friends. Family can always compensate for absence of friendship. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is more important to have a good family than to have friends. Family can always compensate for absence of friendship. 3V2X
With the modernization trends, the line between family and friends is getting blurred where friends are becoming more like family and vice-versa. Eventhough, this trend seems to be taking the world by the storm, i sstill believe nothing can be more important than family. Family is the first social environme that a naive child faces to learn within. Whether it is adjusting in a nuclear family or a joint one, every family plays and essential role in the upbringing and the modelling of an impressionable child. A good family family supports you and encourages you and brings out that zeal in us that we might not know ourselves dwells within us. They never turn their back and always welcome us with open just like a father welcoming his prodigal son. While friends may make a large majority of our life with social media taking over, they are not the ones that e have grown up with and might not accept and share our perceptions, values and other aspects. They are not the thing linking us to out roots and can rather be destructive with thier peer pressure rather than supportive. In conclusion, an apple doesn't fall far from its tree and its that tree that he will aslways feel that he belongs to.
With the modernization trends, the line between
family
and friends is getting blurred where friends are becoming more like
family
and vice-versa.
Eventhough
, this trend seems to be taking the world by the storm,
i sstill
believe nothing can be more
important
than
family
.
Family
is the
first
social
environme
that a naive child faces to learn within. Whether it is adjusting in a nuclear
family
or a joint one, every
family
plays and essential role in the upbringing and the modelling of an impressionable child. A
good
family
family
supports you and encourages you and brings out that zeal in us that we might not know ourselves dwells within us. They never turn their back and always welcome us with open
just
like a father welcoming his prodigal son. While friends may
make
a large majority of our life with social media taking over, they are not the ones that e have grown up with and might not accept and share our perceptions, values and other aspects. They are not the thing linking us to out roots and can
rather
be destructive with
thier
peer pressure
rather
than supportive.
In conclusion
, an apple doesn't fall far from its tree and
its
that tree that he will
aslways
feel that he belongs to.
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IELTS essay It is more important to have a good family than to have friends. Family can always compensate for absence of friendship.

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