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In model life today, Internet is very important for everyone, and all of people can make communication or command whatever they want on it. However, some of those who believe that all of users can say anything that they want to show their opinion online. But some them thinks that governments or companies should to control on the website of their own. First of all, using the internet is ability of all people. In there, they can make argument about something with their opinion. In addition, people also have commands about some topic that they interested it. For example, Facebook is an application very popular in all of countries, and all of people able to command their ideas on the topic which posted by another people even they do not know. It helps them feel relax after a long day working. However, some countries where the government were defended voice of people on the Internet. They found ways to limit commands of users by band accounts or event somewhere the government punished people who say something not good online. For instance, Noth Korea is the country where people cannot command on the Interne, because the government always control it and they do not want to share their information with another countries. In conclusion, Internet today is a tool very popular in everywhere of the world. Whoever can use it and share their opinion, but they should to think clearly before say something specially there is public website or depend on the topic they want to commad.
In model life
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today
, Internet is
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very
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important
for everyone, and all of
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people
can
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make
communication or
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command
whatever they
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want
on it.
However
,
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some
of those who believe that
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all of users
can say anything that they
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want
to
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show
their opinion online.
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But
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some
them
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thinks
that
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governments
or
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companies
should to control on the website of their
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own
.

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First of all
, using the internet is ability of all
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people
. In there, they can
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make
argument about something with their opinion.
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,
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people
also
have
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commands
about
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some
topic that they interested it.
For example
, Facebook is an application
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very
popular in
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all of countries
, and all of
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people
able to
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command
their
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ideas
on the topic which posted by another
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people
even they do not know. It
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helps
them feel relax after a long day working.

However
,
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some
countries where the
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government
were defended
voice of
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people
on the Internet. They found ways to limit
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commands
of users by band accounts or
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event
somewhere the
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government
punished
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people
who say something not
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good
online.
For instance
,
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Noth
Korea is the country where
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people
cannot
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command
on the
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Interne
,
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because
the
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government
always control
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it and
they do not
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want
to share their information with another countries.

In conclusion
, Internet
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today
is a tool
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very
popular in everywhere of the world. Whoever can
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use
it and share their opinion,
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but
they should to
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think
clearly
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before
say something
specially
there is public website or depend on the topic they
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want
to
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commad
.
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IELTS essay some people believe that Internet users able to say anything. Another think government should limit

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
256 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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