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Some people believe that internet is very harmful for children but others believe that it is essential for their study and growing up.dicuss both view.

Some people believe that internet is very harmful for children but others believe that it is essential for their study and growing up. dicuss both view. EdNGD
The internet is considered as a wonderful invention of the modern world and many people of today's society are of the opine that internet is blessing of the modern technology which makes our life very easy, convenient and and permit you however others that reckoned that it is adversefull for juveniles. In this essay, both prospective will be critiqued asoning at logical conclusion. There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate for this argument but the most prominent Mane seems that internet play essential role for getting education. By using it they can get the latest information as well as escalate their imagination power because I was Paisa provide all type of information which posted the knowledge of offspring. Apart from this surfing internet is true for those students who cannot go school and college. Learners can continue their study by using internet. For example during the covid-19 period almost all schools were provided online education with the help of internet consequently the use of cyberspace is beneficial for students. On the other hand, internet has been come my first target of criminal for crime. They are making target on new generation Assamese video sar post on social media which attract towards crime to juveniles therefore by watching these videos they are become addicted of detrimental habits. In addition to this sometimes a Juvenile spend count count less time on online activities which are advisable for them numerous health hazards are faced by juveniles in young age like as weak eyesight back pain and Obesity. Moreover internet provide all type of knowledge it is detrimental as in the childhood period of suffering the have no knowledge what is good or bad consequently they are gathered information which make student bad habits to juveniles. To conclude, Although, cyberspace is beneficial for all fields yet its negative impact on new generation could not be neglected I recommended that it should used for accurate purpose parents should keep under observation to their offsprings while doing online activity.
The internet
is considered
as a wonderful invention of the modern world and
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many
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people
of
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today
's society are of
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the opine
that internet is blessing of the modern technology which
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makes
our life
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very
easy, convenient
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and and
permit you
however
others that reckoned that it is
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adversefull
for
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juveniles
. In this essay, both prospective will
be critiqued
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asoning
at logical conclusion.

There are myriad of reasons which will
further
elaborate for this argument
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but
the most prominent Mane seems that internet play essential role for getting education. By using it they can
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get
the latest information
as well
as escalate their imagination power
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because
I was
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Paisa
provide all type of information which posted the knowledge of offspring. Apart from this surfing internet is true for those students who cannot go school and college. Learners can continue their study by using internet.
For example
during the
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid-19
period almost all schools
were provided
online education with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of internet
consequently
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of cyberspace is beneficial for students.
On the other hand
, internet has been
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come
my
first
target of criminal for crime. They are making target on new generation Assamese video
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sar
post on social media which attract towards crime to
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juveniles
therefore
by watching these videos they
are become
addicted of detrimental habits.
In addition
to this
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sometimes
a
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Juvenile
spend
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count count
less time on online activities which are advisable for them numerous health hazards
are faced
by
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juveniles
in young age like as weak eyesight back pain and Obesity.
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Moreover
internet provide all type of knowledge it is detrimental as in the childhood period of suffering the have no knowledge what is
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good
or
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bad
consequently
they
are gathered
information which
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make
student
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
habits to juveniles.

To conclude
, Although, cyberspace is beneficial for all fields
yet
its
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negative
impact on new generation could not
be neglected
I recommended that it should
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used
for accurate purpose parents should
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keep
under observation to their
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offsprings
while doing online activity.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that internet is very harmful for children but others believe that it is essential for their study and growing up. dicuss both view.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
335 words
6.0
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