Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Some people believe that internet addiction should be treated as a severe illness while others think that this phenomenon should be a normal situation. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people believe that internet addiction should be treated as a severe illness while others think that this phenomenon should be a normal situation. Discuss both views and give your opinion pX7Bw

People have different views about addictions to the Internet. From my perspective, they should be regarded as a dangerous habit even though some think that it is a common circumstance. On the one hand, the Internet plays a crucial role in the development of society, so spending too much time online seems to be a normal activity. People can access online sources for many purposes such as studying, working, entertaining. The Internet provides up with a variety of resources to develop ideas in different fields and stay updated with the latest news. Take students as a example, they can understand lessons and finish their tasks perfectly without spending precious time at the library. That is why people depend on online environment all the time. On the other hand, people consider the Internet addiction to be a severe illness due to the negative consequences it brings. The main disadvantage is that when people depend too much on the Internet, they will immerse themselves in virtual world and are more likely to neglect reality. This is often seen in online communication tools, where people can build more virtual relationships, but may lack interactions with their families and friends. This tendency can be lead to their isolation and adverse effects on their relationships. Secondly, people can suffer some serious problems related to mental health such as headaches, memory loss, and vision problems. Moreover, children can imitate their parents if they overuse phones and the Internet. As a result, it can be seen that addiction causes some detrimental effects to people ‘s lives at the present and in the future. In conclusion, although both views certainly have reasonable justifications, it seems to me that it is better to spend less time using the Internet to avoid undesirable effects and harms to our health.

You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
People
 have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 views about addictions to the Internet. From my perspective, they should be regarded
 as a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
 habit even though
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that it is a common circumstance.

On the one hand, the Internet plays a crucial role in the development of society, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 spending too much time You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
 seems to be a normal activity. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
People
 can access You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
 sources for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 purposes such as studying, working, entertaining. The Internet provides up with a variety of resources to develop This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtsconceptsnotions
ideas
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 fields and stay updated with the latest news. Take students as Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 example, they can understand lessons and finish their tasks perfectly
 without spending precious time at the library. That is
 why You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 depend on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
 environment all the time.

On the other hand
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 consider the Internet addiction to be a severe illness due to the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 consequences it brings. The main disadvantage is that when You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 depend too much on the Internet, they will immerse themselves in virtual world and are more likely to neglect reality. This is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
 communication tools, where You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 can build more virtual relationships, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 may lack interactions with their families and friends. This tendency can be lead to their isolation and adverse effects on their relationships. Secondly
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 can suffer This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 serious problems related to mental health such as headaches, memory loss, and vision problems. Moreover
, children can imitate their parents if they overuse phones and the Internet. As a result
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that addiction causes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 detrimental effects to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 ‘s This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 at the present and in the future.

In conclusion
, although both views certainly
 have reasonable justifications, it seems to me that it is better to spend less time using the Internet to avoid undesirable effects and harms to our health. 