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Some people believe that in order to solve transport problems, government should provide adult citizens with free bicycle. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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some
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changes
 have become cause of the major phenomenon, which have taken transportation that seemed convert them to free bicycles in order to take the deal with more traffic congestion and to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 carbonate emission. Besides
, this transport can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 to do regular exercise. This essay completely supports this intuitive This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 with relevant instance.

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time
, which is saving our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 with faster speed outside the urbanization places. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
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people
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time
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but
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see
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many
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so
 authorities worrying about future conditions This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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time
 in the This word is normally spelled with a hyphen.chock-a-block
chock a block
. According to the research in Tokyo everyday average You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 spend 4 on their way.

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Nevertheless
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have to
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some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritiespublic authorities
governments
. We have inclination to new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
’s experience among You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 owing to in this situation we escape from carbon emission and saving fossil fuel This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they are renewable sources. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Additionally,
Additionally
 returning to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
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be cause
 of our healthy diet and life. For prime example in Holland local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 approximately all of them This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
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this and
 they have set up a day in the week going everywhere without cars.

In conclusion
, using vehicles were Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).popular, and
popular and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 they are making This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 problems to environment while You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 have found new solution basically
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
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habits and
 we are support them relevant examples. In the future subsequent generation will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
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