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Computer games are very popular for all ages and nationalities. Parents think this has little educational value and it will be harmful for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Video games are being popular among us. The cause is, it is cheap and affordable for everyone. However, parents do not like that our child every will get sing into digital pleasure. This increase in the market. Whereas, father and mother did not know that, their child tiptoe buying. On the other hand, it has become a business for manufactures. Despite the government, but nothing solving problems. More than trumping kids has become an addiction. Moreover, they knew, whether, exams.
Video games are being popular among us. The cause is, it is
cheap
and affordable for everyone.
However
, parents do not like that our child every will
get
sing into digital pleasure. This increase in the market. Whereas, father and mother did not know that, their child tiptoe buying.
On the other hand
, it has become a business for manufactures. Despite the
government
,
but
nothing solving problems. More than trumping kids has become an addiction.
Moreover
, they knew
, whether
, exams.
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IELTS essay Computer games are very popular for all ages and nationalities. Parents think this has little educational value and it will be harmful for children.

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  American English
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80 words
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