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Write about the following topic: Some people believe that history has no value in the contemporary world. But some believe that we still need history to learn from the past. Discuss both viewpoints and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is undeniably true that history is a resource. But some people argue that history has no value while some people argue that we need to know the history for future. In this essay I will discuss both the views and provide my support for the latter view. There are many reasons why people think history has no value. One of the reason is people think that there was no technology in the past and we can't learn anything from it as the future world is revolving in technologies. The other reason is that history contains many years dates to remember which is not useful for us. History is a subject we use rarely in our life. So people think it as a waste of time. Some people think that the past may not occur in the future, so it's not necessary to learn. For example, to get independence many people fought and sacrificed their life. But, we dont get that situation again. On the other hand history helps to understand our culture and where we came from. History also helps to make rules and laws by learning from the past. History lets us to know how drastic change has occured in our lives. Also, it is useful to know the past political strategy to prevent disaster in future. History also helps to know how to solve some of the problems by referring to the past. History can serve us as a guide to not repeat the mistakes in the future. In conclusion, even though there are specific situations where history is useless to learn, I believe that history is important to make our future better.
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history
is a resource.
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some
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people
argue that
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history
has no value while
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some
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people
argue that we need to
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know
the
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history
for
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future
. In this essay I will discuss both the views and provide my support for the latter view.

There are
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many
reasons why
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people
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think
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history
has no value. One of the reason is
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people
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think
that there was no technology in the
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past and
we can't learn anything from it as the
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future
world is revolving in technologies. The other reason is that
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history
contains
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many
years dates to remember which is not useful for us.
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History
is a subject we
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use rarely
in our life.
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So
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people
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think
it as a waste of time.
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Some
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people
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think
that the
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past
may not occur in the
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future
,
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so
it's not necessary to learn.
For example
, to
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get
independence
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many
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people
fought and sacrificed their
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life
.
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But
, we
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dont
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get
that situation again.

On the other hand
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history
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helps
to understand our culture and where we came from.
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History
also
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helps
to
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make
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rules
and laws by learning from the
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past
.
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History
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lets
us to
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know
how drastic
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change
has
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occured
in our
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lives
.
Also
, it is useful to
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know
the
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past
political strategy to
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prevent
disaster in
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future
.
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History
also
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helps
to
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know
how to solve
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some of the
problems by referring to the past.

History can serve us as a guide to not repeat the mistakes in the future.

In conclusion
,
even though
there are specific situations where
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history
is useless to learn, I believe that
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history
is
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important
to
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make
our
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future
better.
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IELTS essay : Some people believe that history has no value in the contemporary world. But some believe that we still need history to learn from the past.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
276 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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