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Many people say that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

There is no doubt that this day the significance of saving the environment for future globel. However, the question is "Is the growth of multinational corporation number spoil the environment system? Is one of the most cotroversial issues today. In this essay I am going to examine this phenomenon and intrduce my opinion. On one side of argument there are people who believe that the benifits outweight the advantages. The reason for beliving this is
There is no doubt that this day the significance of saving the environment for future
globel
.
However
, the question is
"
Is the growth of multinational corporation number spoil the environment system? Is one of the most
cotroversial
issues
today
. In this essay I am going to examine this phenomenon and
intrduce
my opinion.

On one side of argument there are
people
who believe that the
benifits
outweight
the advantages. The reason for
beliving
this
is
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IELTS essay Many people say that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
74 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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