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Some people believe that governments should pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and examples.

Some people believe that governments should pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities. Give your own opinion and examples. QJjb
The purpose of government spending in any activity is always and controversial one some folks ponder that regulatory bodies ought to invest money on pupil fees in tertiary education who really want to make a fruitful life. I firmly subscribe with the writer notion and reason of my point of view is trail paragraph. The predominant justification to support my inclination is that the student are the policy maker of tomorrow and can obtain a plethora of opportunity towards the nation in upcoming days. To explicate, A student can resolve every conflict in their own family in the upcoming after acquiring proper knowledge from University and this will happen when regulatory bodies pay expensive for pupil. Moreover a number of students who really want to do something for the nation or for themselves it can get the aid from authorities. In addition, a country can get a brilliant student who have the proficiency skill and might can work in the future. For instance, in New Zealand, 70% of student fees is being still paid by the administrative. Thus, it will get benefit to both of them students as well as nation. Furthermore, due to dearth of financial, some guidance are not willing to get adminisation in University, owning to they do not have adequate rfund to spend money for the offspring. Repercussions, some Schoolgoers skill and ability can eradicate. Not only a particular student get benefit if authorities pay fees but also a nation because some student have ability to been an officer: IPS, IAS, And, DSP. For example, in India, there is many University who is paying the rent of pupli by the behalf of government. As a result, now though students become and high level officers and living a fruitful life. In conclusion, although burecrafts, do not have convenient money to invest for students, rather than spending money on building highly level of Infrastructures they can spend on students because students are the future of day after tomorrow.
The purpose of
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spending in any activity is always and controversial one
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some
folks ponder that regulatory bodies ought to invest
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money
on pupil fees in tertiary education
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who
really
want to
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make
a fruitful life. I
firmly
subscribe with the writer notion and reason of my point of view is trail paragraph.

The predominant justification to support my inclination is that the
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student
are the
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policy maker
of tomorrow and can obtain a plethora of opportunity towards the nation in upcoming days. To explicate, A
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student
can resolve every conflict in their
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own
family in the upcoming after acquiring proper knowledge from University and this will happen when regulatory bodies pay expensive for pupil.
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Moreover
a number of
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students
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who
really
want to do something for the nation or for themselves it can
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get
the aid from authorities.
In addition
, a country can
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get
a brilliant
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student
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who
have the proficiency
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skill
and might can work in the future.
For instance
, in New Zealand, 70% of
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student
fees is being
still
paid by the administrative.
Thus
, it will
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get
benefit to both of them
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students
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as well as
nation.

Furthermore
, due to dearth of financial,
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some
guidance are not willing to
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get
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adminisation
in University, owning to they do not have adequate
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rfund
to spend
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money
for the offspring. Repercussions,
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some
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Schoolgoers
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skill
and ability can eradicate. Not
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only
a particular
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student
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get
benefit if authorities pay fees
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but
also
a nation
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because
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some
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student
have ability
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to been
an officer: IPS, IAS, And, DSP.
For example
, in India, there is
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many University
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who
is paying the rent of
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pupli
by the behalf of
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government
.
As a result
,
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now
though
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students
become and high level officers and living a fruitful life.

In conclusion
, although
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burecrafts
, do not have convenient
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money
to invest for
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students
,
rather
than spending
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money
on building
highly
level of Infrastructures they can spend on
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students
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because
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students
are the future of day after tomorrow.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that governments should pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities. Give your own opinion and examples.

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