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some people believe that government should fund local companies and some think that it is better have to have foreign companies for the decelopment. To what extent do you agree or diaagree

some people believe that government should fund local companies and some think that it is better have to have foreign companies for the decelopment. To what extent do you agree or diaagree 6L5el

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