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some people believe that government should fund local companies and some think that it is better have to have foreign companies for the decelopment. To what extent do you agree or diaagree

some people believe that government should fund local companies and some think that it is better have to have foreign companies for the decelopment. To what extent do you agree or diaagree 6L5el
Since the 21st century commenced, for the ameliorate of any nation the organization are being played an vital role in every aspects. Therefore, many developing countries are being relentlessly invited top reputed companies from all across the world for the development of their countries, however, some people believe that it is beneficial if government could spend money on local companies rather than the top MNCs. Indeed, I firmly disagree with the notion to shut down the MNCs. To articulate, ideas are going to be cover in the forthcoming paragraphs. To commence, it is often thought that the companies have provided more salaries and fringe benefits to their employees. Therefore, it helps to maintain the level of employment in different nation by providing quality jobs to the professionals. To illustrate, currently the workers are more interested towards the private job sectors in comparison to government sectors, however they provides extra compensation and facilities. Consequently, it is the great advantages for the students to establish their career in their dream companies if they are the part of their nation, with the home environment. To elucidate, it is also aid to inclined the economy by export. If companies are settled in the nation then the population does not have to depend on the counter parts for the materials or equipments. To epidome, the society of any Nation could not have to wait for the launch date of specific products if it is being made in their own country, like mobile phones. It leads to save the money, and utilised money would be important for other factors like health care and education. To recapitulate, top MNC companies are already being played an vital role for the improvement in economy. Indeed, the government should be invited more companies to their society, it would be beneficial for the population to get employment.
Since the 21st century commenced, for
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the ameliorate
of any
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nation
the organization are
being played
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an
vital role in every
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aspects
.
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,
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developing countries
are being
relentlessly
invited top reputed
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companies
from all across the world for the development of their countries,
however
,
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some
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people
believe that it is beneficial if
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government
could spend money on local
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companies
rather
than the top
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MNCs
.
Indeed
, I
firmly
disagree with the notion to shut down the
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MNCs
. To articulate,
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ideas
are going to be cover in the forthcoming paragraphs.

To commence, it is
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often
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thought
that the
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companies
have provided more salaries and fringe benefits to their employees.
Therefore
, it
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helps
to maintain the level of employment in
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different
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nation
by providing quality jobs to the professionals. To illustrate,
currently
the workers are more interested towards the private job sectors
in comparison
to
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government
sectors,
however
they
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provides
extra compensation and facilities.
Consequently
, it is the great advantages for the students to establish their career in their dream
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companies
if they are the part of their
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nation
, with the home environment.

To elucidate, it is
also
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aid
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to inclined
the economy by export. If
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companies
are settled
in the
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nation
then the population does not
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have to
depend on the
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counter parts
for the materials or equipments. To
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epidome
, the society of any
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Nation
could not
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have to
wait for the launch date of specific products if it is
being made
in their
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own
country, like mobile phones. It leads to save the money, and
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utilised
money would be
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important
for other factors like health care and education.

To recapitulate, top
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MNC
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companies
are already
being played
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an
vital role for the improvement in economy.
Indeed
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should
be invited
more
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companies
to their society, it would be beneficial for the population to
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get
employment.

IELTS essay some people believe that government should fund local companies and some think that it is better have to have foreign companies for the decelopment. To what extent do you agree or diaagree

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306 words
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