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Some people believe that good teamwork is what makes companies successful. Others feel that it is more important to have a good leader. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is considered by some that the success of a firm relay on the quality of collaboration between employees while others claim that the head of the group plays a more important role in it. In my opinion, both of them are a major component to achieve success. On the one hand, many think what is form an organization is their employers and if they affordable enough to work in a group robustly the success of that company is fully guaranteed. In other words, as an entity matter, working relationships will affect the outcome and for this reason, for well-known and thriving companies such as Google or Facebook, it is a significant factor in hiring people. On the other hand, a leadership with complete nobility that is able to conduct members perfectly is a key ingredient of success. An experienced manager motivates people to a higher level of performance through their strong human relationships. Indeed, it is an important function of management that helps to maximize efficiency and to achieve organizational goals. Finally, in my opinion, it is difficult to state one of these two is more effective in booming a business. Both of them, in fact, play an equal role in success. A professional group without a leader would not find its way to achieve success. In contrast, a leader cannot reach the peak of success if their member would not work with each other. In conclusion, teamwork and a leader are the two wings of success that each company must have if they are seeking to meet with success.
It
is considered
by
some
that the
success
of a firm relay on the quality of collaboration between employees while others claim that the head of the group plays a more
important
role in it. In my opinion, both of them are a major component to achieve success.

On the one hand,
many
think
what is form an organization is their employers and if they affordable
enough
to work in a group
robustly
the
success
of that
company
is
fully
guaranteed.
In other words
, as an entity matter, working relationships will affect the outcome and
for this reason
, for well-known and thriving
companies
such as Google or Facebook, it is a significant factor in hiring
people
.

On the other hand
, a leadership with complete nobility
that is
able to conduct members
perfectly
is a key ingredient of
success
. An experienced manager motivates
people
to a higher level of performance through their strong human relationships.
Indeed
, it is an
important
function of management that
helps
to maximize efficiency and to achieve organizational goals.

Finally
, in my opinion, it is difficult to state one of these two is more effective in booming a business. Both of them, in fact, play an equal role in
success
. A professional group without a leader would not find its way to achieve
success
.
In contrast
, a leader cannot reach the peak of
success
if their member would not work with each other.

In conclusion
, teamwork and a leader are the two wings of
success
that each
company
must
have if they are seeking to
meet
with
success
.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that good teamwork is what makes companies successful. Others feel that it is more important to have a good leader.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
261 words
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