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Describe a holiday you recently had

Describe a holiday you recently had GNBB2
Holday is paramount role of everyone's life. It is a best day when someone can enjoyed and feel refresh. Today I would like to talk about a summer vocations. In my hectic schedule, I am very busy in my study. I have not enough time to meet witb friends and spending time with family. But in summer holidays, I made a planned go to chandigarh. My father booked the bus and my family and some friends went to chandigarh. It was very nice place to see them. Firstly, I went to chapardchidi. I clicked many photos. It was historical statues. I had not knowledge about these war. However, when I read at all history. I gave knowledge. Secondly, we went to rock garden. It was eye - catching places. If a person he made a lot of think by waste material. It was amazing think to seen us. Then, we went to thai restaurants. Apart from that, we booked a hotel room. Next day, we went to sukna lake. We were boating there. After a long time we spend quality time with parents and friends. It was my favorite holiday. Which I enjoyed most. It gives me refresh and relaxing.
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Holday
is paramount role of everyone's life. It is
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a
best day when someone can
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enjoyed
and feel refresh.
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Today
I would like to talk about a summer
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vocations
. In my hectic schedule, I am
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very
busy in my study. I have not
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enough
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time
to
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meet
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witb
friends and spending
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time
with family.
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But
in summer holidays, I made a planned go to
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chandigarh
. My father booked the bus and my family and
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some
friends
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went
to
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chandigarh
. It was
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very
nice place to
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see
them.
Firstly
, I
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went
to
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chapardchidi
. I clicked
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many
photos. It was historical statues. I had not knowledge about these war.
However
, when I read at all history. I gave knowledge.
Secondly
, we
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went
to rock garden. It was eye
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-
catching places.
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If
a person he made
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a lot of
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think
by waste material. It was amazing
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think
to
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seen
us. Then, we
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went
to
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thai
restaurants. Apart from that, we booked a hotel room.
Next
day, we
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went
to
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sukna
lake. We were boating there. After a long
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time
we spend quality
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time
with parents and friends. It was my favorite holiday. Which I enjoyed most. It gives me refresh and relaxing.
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IELTS essay Describe a holiday you recently had

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
200 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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