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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion?

Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion? 2DOM
*Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion? * Artificially intelligent robots are increasingly substuting humain in the future. It is true that robots can replace humans to do several occupations, however, it is unlikely that jobs requiring human contact can be carried out otherwise. This essay will discuss why humans are eventually supplanted by the robots to do a significant amount of occupations. On the one hand, robots may be able to accomplish any occupation that doesn't require human thoroughness and dexterity. The artificially intelligence helps to do simultaneously multiples tasks in a record time with minimal effort. Also, many campagnies opt for the automatism rather than hiring, training and employing humains. They consider that purchasing robots is far less expensive. Also, they are commonly thought to be more honest than some unbelievable employees. For example, Nissan Motors campany had fired in 2015, 30%of its staff in favour of intelligent robots due to their lower cost. In addition to that, they never claim for holidays or holidays pay. On the other hand, there are some assignments that must be inescapably done by humans because the robots will never achieve them correctly. Human nature provides some abilities which could never replaced by the robots, especially in particular fields like psychology, education, medecine, voluntary work and so on. There are other jobs that necessitate human patience, thorougness and dexterity rity such as handcrafted works where the human touch is clearly detected. To sum up, artificially robots are progressively threatening human employment in the future. While a significant number of human occupations may be done by the robots, few skilled labour will always require the human presence. Ultimately, only few jobs will be spared by the extending of the new technologies over the world.
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Artificially
intelligent robots are
increasingly
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substuting
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humain
in the future. It is true that robots can replace
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humans
to do several occupations,
however
, it is unlikely that
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jobs
requiring
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human
contact can
be carried
out
otherwise
. This essay will discuss why
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humans
are
eventually
supplanted by the robots to do a significant amount of occupations.

On the one hand, robots may be able to accomplish any occupation that doesn't require
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human
thoroughness and dexterity. The
artificially
intelligence
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helps
to do
simultaneously
multiples tasks in a record time with minimal effort.
Also
,
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many
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campagnies
opt for the automatism
rather
than hiring, training and employing
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humains
. They consider that purchasing robots is far less expensive.
Also
, they are
commonly
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thought
to be more honest than
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some
unbelievable employees.
For example
, Nissan Motors
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campany
had fired in 2015, 30%of its staff in
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favour
of intelligent robots due to their lower cost.
In addition
to that, they never claim for holidays or holidays pay.

On the other hand
, there are
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some
assignments that
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must
be
inescapably
done by
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humans
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because
the robots will never achieve them
correctly
.
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Human
nature provides
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some
abilities which could never replaced by the robots,
especially
in particular
fields like psychology, education,
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medecine
, voluntary work and
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so
on. There are other
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jobs
that necessitate
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human
patience,
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thorougness
and dexterity
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rity
such as handcrafted works where the
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human
touch is
clearly
detected.

To sum up,
artificially
robots are
progressively
threatening
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human
employment in the future. While a significant number of
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human
occupations may
be done
by the robots, few skilled
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labour
will always require the
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human
presence.
Ultimately
,
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only
few
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jobs
will
be spared
by the extending of the new technologies over the world.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion?

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302 words
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