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Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the worlds fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the worlds fuel resources. RrGp
It is believed by a wide majority of individuals that air pollution is being created by air tourism so it should be banned. I somewhat disagree with given notion. To Begin with, There are an array of supportive reasons why many people deem that air lines should be restricted. Primary reason is that, it leads to environmental pollution. In other words, alternative fuel is used in planes which is the major cause of air degradation because it pumps out various obnoxious gases. As a result, it gives a birth to a host of complications such as asthma and so on. Primary cause is that,
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IELTS essay Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the worlds fuel resources.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
104 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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