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Some people believe that doing Reiki is better than taking medicine. Do you consonant with it? Give reasons, examples and supporting details to reinforce your opinion

Some people believe that doing Reiki is better than taking medicine. Do you consonant with it? Give reasons, examples and supporting details to reinforce your opinion YmwrK
Medicine, a modern invention, without which human life is impossible, is now a days fast curing, easily accessible, convenient and cheaper means to cure. However, it failed: to be without side effect; to cure all the disease; to cure stress and tension and to be relaxation and healing art. In contrast to it Reiki, a new technology of healing, became the solution that is neither having side effects nor expensive and inaccessible.
Medicine, a modern invention, without which human life is impossible, is
Did you mean "nowadays"?
now a days
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
curing,
easily
accessible, convenient and cheaper means to cure.
However
, it failed: to be without side effect; to cure all the disease; to cure
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
and tension and to be relaxation and healing art.
In contrast
to
Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'it'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
it Reiki
, a new technology of healing, became the solution
that is
neither having side effects nor expensive and inaccessible.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that doing Reiki is better than taking medicine. Do you consonant with it? Give reasons, examples and supporting details to reinforce your opinion

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72 words
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