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Some people believe that doing Reiki is better than taking medicine. Do you consonant with it? Give reasons, examples and supporting details to reinforce your opinion

Some people believe that doing Reiki is better than taking medicine. Do you consonant with it? Give reasons, examples and supporting details to reinforce your opinion YmwrK

Medicine, a modern invention, without which human life is impossible, is now a days fast curing, easily accessible, convenient and cheaper means to cure. However, it failed: to be without side effect; to cure all the disease; to cure stress and tension and to be relaxation and healing art. In contrast to it Reiki, a new technology of healing, became the solution that is neither having side effects nor expensive and inaccessible.

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fast
 curing, easily
 accessible, convenient and cheaper means to cure. However
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stress
 and tension and to be relaxation and healing art. In contrast
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it Reiki
, a new technology of healing, became the solution that is
 neither having side effects nor expensive and inaccessible. 

IELTS essay Some people believe that doing Reiki is better than taking medicine. Do you consonant with it? Give reasons, examples and supporting details to reinforce your opinion

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American English

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