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Those quotes just enlighten me about the facts that everyone knows but doesn't want to admit. To my surprised, I see myself in them, as they read my mind. For example, I often watch videos about productivity, self-improvement and conceive myself as the person they talk to in those videos: having a sense of humor, going to bed before 11 p. m and getting up before sunrise, being a dynamic student, and so on. However, I find it difficult to sustain those good habits and then regress to what I am before while being self-loathing. As the result, I repeat the cycle: watching motivational clips, loathing to be more energetic, being like that in a few days then returning to the old road.
Those quotes
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enlighten me about the facts that everyone knows
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doesn't want to admit. To my surprised, I
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myself in them, as they read my mind.
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videos about productivity, self-improvement and conceive myself as the person they talk to in those videos: having a sense of humor, going to bed
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11 p. m and getting up
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sunrise, being a dynamic student, and
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, I find it difficult to sustain those
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good
habits and then regress to what I am
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while being self-loathing. As the result, I repeat the cycle: watching motivational clips, loathing to be more energetic, being like that in a few days then returning to the
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road.
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IELTS essay Tell about your favorite quote

Essay
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1 paragraphs
123 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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